chrmishaUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 11/07/08
Oh this was lovely. Just what I was in the mood for. Thank you! And excellent writing! You captured both Harry and Hermione perfectly! Fantastic job! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 02/03/08
As my hair is auburn I can tell you with confidence that auburn is not brown but a dark red, so you should stop writing Hermione had auburn hair. |
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i like how you ended it. didnt prolong it too long. but i hope you consider writing more fanficts! |
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i enjoy reading AU's from the story plot, especially from hermione's view. there's a lot of emotions you wrote, good job. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/07/06
from ALL 4 movies it seems that hermione and harry will get together. the little looks, nuances and such. i hope rowling will let that happen and NOT ron and hermione - that's just too wrong. but i hope rowling will keeeeiiillll that ginny.  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/07/06
from ALL 4 movies it seems that hermione and harry will get together. the little looks, nuances and such. i hope rowling will let that happen and NOT ron and hermione - that's just too wrong. but i hope rowling will keeeeiiillll that ginny. |
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I like this part in Hermione's point of view. I like you described Krum and Fleur's appearances. |
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MuirninSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 10/06/06
Very interesting take on the movie and the unseen moments that should have been there ... I especially liked in the movie how when Hermione gets that look on her face and says 'everythings going to change now' and Harry responds with 'yes' He actually reaches out to her ... that to me is a very powerful harmony moment even if Ron is right there being oblivious to everything ...
I liked it very much ... good work
As Always,
Muirnin - who always ships what is right not what is easy ... Damn the Canon full steam ahead for HMS Harmony, Oh and please pass the pumpkin pie - extra whipped cream |
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CathyDSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 04/06/06
Nice insight into Hermione's thoughts. I enjoyed this fic. I could feel her emotions, and actually had tears in my eyes at the end of the first chapter. Nicely done.
~Cat |
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Aw this last chapter was so cute! I love them! Hermione's point of view is awesome! |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I just thought it would be nice to see things from Hermione's POV, because we all know what Harry's going through. Thanks for the review! |
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aracneSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 21/05/06
really nice, I liked it a lot!!! you write very well.
take care |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much for reviewing! It's much appreciated. |
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Tank03Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 21/05/06
A really well done piece. It was interesting to read Hermione's take on the events. It was touching without being sappy or melodramatic. Hope to read more of your stuff. Thanks for sharing. |
Author Feedback: I'm very glad it wasn't too sappy or melodramatic. Those were both things I wanted to avoid. There's an awful lot of that out there, so I thought I'd try a different direction. Thanks for reviewing! |
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Wow, I really enjoyed both of these scenes. And I like how you based them off of Hermione's pov in the movie and showing her anxiety while the reader knows what's going on with Harry at the same time. I really enjoyed this, and I hope to see more from you soon! |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much! I just thought it would be an interesting idea, since like you said, we know what Harry's doing, it would be interesting to see what Hermione's thinking. I just posted another two-part story, so maybe I'll see you again! Cheers! |
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