Oh my goodness! How can you just leave us hanging like this! PLease Please update this story soon!

Oh my God. I love this story. You are such an excellent writer. So dark but then you give us a ray of hope and love. I read your other story and enjoyed it so much that I had to check this one out. I do notice that it is paused, but I hope you get back to it soon. I love your writing.

Wow, I just came across your story and love it! It's very well written and has me hooked. I see that the status says 'paused', I do hope that means that you *will* be writing more of it sometime. I'd hate to see this story go unfinished, it really is very good.

That last scene was frikkin HOT! Very nicely done. You could really feel the hurt and anger that they were feeling towards each other, and then the sex... OMG! LOL I do hope you'll write more, cuz I'm dying to know what's going to happen. Does Harry stay, does Ron find out -and if so how does he react... SO many things left unsaid.

~Cat

Hey there, I remember a while ago you tried to update this and it didn't work...any chance of seeing the new chapter? I'm dying to read on!

I don't usually bug authors but I am very fond of this story so far, and would love it if you're planning to continue it.

Hey there, I remember a while ago you tried to update this and it didn't work...any chance of seeing the new chapter? I'm dying to read on!

I don't usually bug authors but I am very fond of this story so far, and would love it if you're planning to continue it.

wow. this is super intense. i love the dark emotion behind it, how harry isnt just care free. the plot is also very interesting, i am quite intrigued by the part with the pearls, and now this new orb thing. i cant wait to see where it goes, although i hope that harry doesnt keep feeling like he needs to leave.

umm...where was Ron during all this? if they're in the sitting room, then Ron should have heard all that. hm....i sense trouble!

Awww, I thought this story was updated, but there's no new chapters. Hmph.

I don't know what's going on, but I just recieved a notice in my inbox that this story has six chapters, and it's only showing up as four... Is something messy going on or what?

The plot of this story is so interesting! I don't just mean the Harry/Hermione parts (which are great!), but the actualy story arc. I love it! And I hope Harry doesn't leave Hermione in the morning...

What can I say? This is quite intense. It's like CAPSLOCK Harry all grown up. I really liked their confrontation scene because it let out the tension and emotions they were feeling. I could believe this description you used because in OotP they were already moving closer when they were arguing, so these actions you wrote are pretty much in character, IMO.

I was surprised at the change in the rating, though, since I started reading it at PG13. But, it was written okay.

Looking forward to the next update!

I like your writing style, and am very happy to have stumbled onto this story. Keep up the good work and get us another chapter!

This is quite beautifully written. I rarely see angsty Harry written so well. I feel for Ron, as I always do in these kind of H/Hr situations - I'm assuming that it's going to be hell for the Trio very soon, hmm?

To add to that, the mystery plot/s which is quite intruiging. I'm glad you're not going the route of a ot of stories on PK where the only story is how Harry and hermione get together. I also like the fact that they've been out of school for ages and they're STILL looking for the bloody horcruxes!

Hope you update sooner rather than later.

this is fantastic. keep it up. but seriously, I feel really sorry for ron. good diolouge.

Ahhh! This story is SO GOOD. I love the strange and intriguing plot, and I love how you're writing Harry and Hermione. Keep posting!