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This is a really good chapter. I would like to see if you would continue with it. I would really like to see how it will end. Please update sometime soon. Thanks. |
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NickUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/10/03
Hey! I like your story just the way it is! I also find it kind of funny.^_^ Hehe . .also I like how Harry isnt depressed all the time, although probably just about all of you wont agree with me. Its just that, its ok when harry dosnt really want to talk about it and all, but to keep looking back into the past is quite depressing. Just forgetting about it for a while makes the story quite a bit happier.^_^ |
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CrisUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/10/03
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I'm Just curious but shouldn't Harry be not surprised about the news that he will be the one to defeat Voldemort? Your story sounds as if it's all new to him |
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hey so so so so so sorry the last review was mine |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/06/03
hey that was a great start to your story, i really really liked it and i hope you do continue despite the 5 reveiw average. thinkin that this has a OotP spoiler right? maybe u could, as a suggestion, add harry bein a bit sad for the death of'that person'. also i can tell that H/Hr isnt goin to be for a bit right> so i hope nobody give u a bad review because of that. keep up the great work and youll be in my fav list as soon as i get it figured out.....Yuri |
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allieUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/06/03
didnt like this first chapter. should be more h/h |
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mmilfordSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/06/03
Great start, a few odd descriptions I felt, like calling Voldemorts plans nasty, I would say Vile and Evil, Nasty's too nice if you know what I mean, still each to his own. Great Start, can't wait to read more... |
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JoeUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/06/03
Great start!!!
PLease write more soon! |
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hmm this is very strange
why would people simply put a zero rating for no apparent reason?
oh well, maybe this will even it up a little |
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interesting storyline, although it could use some work along the lines of grammar, and sentence structure.
your basic idea is sound, although i would recommend you to read pieces written by others and maybe get a feel for what might improve your story.
all in all i think your story is very good and shows great promise, i hope to see more of your work in the future. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/06/03
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anglUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/06/03
i want more!!
my only problem with it is that some of the grammar is a bit funky, but otherwise its awesomeness |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/06/03
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