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Harry Potter, downfall of Lord Voldemort

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John Fitzgerald
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/04/06
This is a really good chapter. I would like to see if you would continue with it. I would really like to see how it will end. Please update sometime soon. Thanks.
 

Nick
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/10/03
Hey! I like your story just the way it is! I also find it kind of funny.^_^ Hehe . .also I like how Harry isnt depressed all the time, although probably just about all of you wont agree with me. Its just that, its ok when harry dosnt really want to talk about it and all, but to keep looking back into the past is quite depressing. Just forgetting about it for a while makes the story quite a bit happier.^_^
 

Cris
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/10/03
Oh god! That was awsome!! Please, just make sure you finish the second chapter soon! I cant wait!! Hehe . .^_^ Great job with it anyway
 

Flaming Aussie
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/06/03
I'm Just curious but shouldn't Harry be not surprised about the news that he will be the one to defeat Voldemort? Your story sounds as if it's all new to him
 

yurimionepotter
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/06/03
hey so so so so so sorry the last review was mine
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/06/03
hey that was a great start to your story, i really really liked it and i hope you do continue despite the 5 reveiw average. thinkin that this has a OotP spoiler right? maybe u could, as a suggestion, add harry bein a bit sad for the death of'that person'. also i can tell that H/Hr isnt goin to be for a bit right> so i hope nobody give u a bad review because of that. keep up the great work and youll be in my fav list as soon as i get it figured out.....Yuri
 

allie
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/06/03
didnt like this first chapter. should be more h/h
 

mmilford
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/06/03
Great start, a few odd descriptions I felt, like calling Voldemorts plans nasty, I would say Vile and Evil, Nasty's too nice if you know what I mean, still each to his own. Great Start, can't wait to read more...
 

Joe
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/06/03
Great start!!!

PLease write more soon!
 

SwordSmyth
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/06/03
hmm this is very strange
why would people simply put a zero rating for no apparent reason?
oh well, maybe this will even it up a little
 

SwordSmyth
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/06/03
interesting storyline, although it could use some work along the lines of grammar, and sentence structure.
your basic idea is sound, although i would recommend you to read pieces written by others and maybe get a feel for what might improve your story.
all in all i think your story is very good and shows great promise, i hope to see more of your work in the future.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/06/03
 

angl
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/06/03
i want more!!

my only problem with it is that some of the grammar is a bit funky, but otherwise its awesomeness
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/06/03
 

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