fascinating take on what could have happened but now its more like the begining to a whole nother story instead, you should offer this as a challenge or something if you don't plan to continue

aww...that was good. i'm sad that it was only a one shot. cough cough sequal cough cough. terribly sorry. there must have been something in my throat. anyways...keep up the good work. i hope to read some more of your work in the future.

later, kel

love it!!! i cant wait for an update!! UPDATE NOW!! hurry sre you typeing?? HURRY UP!!

this is good
i theink u should do a h/hr sttory following this
rallly good

Well written...very well written indeed. It tells a very poignant version of what could have been if James and Lily had gone with their first instincts to use Sirius as their secrect keeper. I think that it would be intersting to explore the possibly of how Harry would have grown up differently if he'd had both his parents with him. Perhaps ther is another one-shot in your reserves to cover that piece of the story. Either way very well done!

if onli things did hapn this way... ...wel...great story!! u shud do a sequel of harry growin up!!

OH wow a powerful beginning indeed. And a switch in history I like it. Can't wait to see what happens next. Great Writing.

Yay! First review!! I liked your story!! Good job!
Now i'm off to read your others!