archdog77Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/11/07
I like your stories. Please keep writing them, I look forward to them. |
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seven or eight eh?  what a wonderful fic!!! ...off to read more
ramble on
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spenceM7Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/08/06
And that's an evil little author's note ...
Ah, I do love Ron and Luna, and R/L smut is a real treat. This is certainly a great little break from the stresses of Circle's End.
Thanks for the cookie! |
Author Feedback: Never enough R/L smut, and when you mix it with H/Hr smut...it's all good. |
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great out take, do you mind if i plug it into my personal saved copy?
love your stuff, and am looking forward to hours of happy reading to get all the way caught up.
Warm regards |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/06/06
OMG!That was soooooo good! You really need to write more Ron/Luna stories, they are wonderful! Plus, there's only like eight total of those kind on this whole sight. Please continue! |
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Ohhh, you are sneaky. This was fantastic. I loved it. I did laugh at Harry and Hermione's method of getting Ron out of their suite.
I'm totally smitten with Ron and Luna. Babies. Oh my.
And that sneaky last author's note...Now, I must go and re-read to see if I missed anything.
Pam |
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Awesome chapter. So Luna wants a family she and Ron may get started before Harry and Hermione. Ron would think of having seven or eight kids wouldn't he? I love the snipits of R/L b/c we just don't get to see both sides of the story in Circle. |
Author Feedback: Thanks. Luna is fun to write. |
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Mary6707Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/05/06
Thiat was incredible! They are both such wonderful couples. I just love how they are able to be with each other! They work so well together. I also love how much Luna loves Hermione and vice versa. Really Great! |
Author Feedback: Well you know, neither of the girls has a sister (yet, Hermione will in a few months) and Hermione lost her surrogate in ginny due to her actions. |
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lzodSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/05/06
A clue??? Oh great, now you are going to make me think! *G* But I did like this little one shot, your smut is great.
Lisa |
Author Feedback: Thanks |
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CaliburstSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/05/06
Wow . . . wow. The end of this fic was one of the most heart-warming, deeply touching moments I've ever read. The world is a wonder to see through Lunas eyes-- while her sense of symmetry is offbeat, those different notes reinforce each other very well. We've seen a lot of "funny" Luna or "horny" Luna or "brilliant" but not very much of the innermost Luna. She seems (at least, in the way you write) that Luna is an INCREDIABLY private person when it comes to her deepest, innermost wants and desires, that physicality is a coping mechanism for her, that she expresses outwardly her innermost needs in that way. We all do that in one way or another, so it isn't abnormal. Of course, since "Circle" is more from Hermione and Harrys point of view we don't see as much of Ron and Luna as we do our main pair, so that's probably a big reason why. But your depiction of Luna in her reaction to Hagrids death, I think, is an INTEGRAL look into her character. Luna has lost many people she loves. Her mother, and then, probably Dumbledore (on a friendship level, perhaps she had known Cedric and was there when Harry brought back his body?) and most recently Hagrid. For all we know, her loonyness is a coping mechanism in itself. Not that she somehow talks differently, but it's a kind of disassociation that doesn't necessarily disassociate her. The end of "Phoenix" when she inadvertantly comforts Harry is a touchstone. One of the reasons why I disliked "Half-Blood Prince" so much was because Luna (and Neville as well) who was such a vital, vibrant character in "Phoenix" was more-or-less discarded. Luna is a character that grabs the reader, enchants them, and makes us want to know more, just as any secondary character should do. Lunas quest for a family in the world that has destroyed many of her family members is not only evocative but, in this fic, deeply moving. I would like to see more moments like this between Ron and Luna, or just involving Luna. |
Author Feedback: Thanks, though Horny!Luna is a particular favorite of mine  I'm trying to write her as a 3-d character. |
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DJ32Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/05/06
Thats not fair now I have to reread the whole thing.  But itis probably the fact that they are getting maried. Any way keep it up. |
Author Feedback: Actaully, no, we knew that they would get married some time way back in chapter 29-30 of circle. |
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man I hate to read it cause I don't want to know about circle's end until it is finished and I can read it! ugh!! soo mean you are to do this to me!! putting complete on it and all!
dilligas
guess I gotta read it anyway! |
Author Feedback: There's not much spoiled in circle, just a couple of points |
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emilyjaneSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/05/06
Hey that was cool. Im not surprised luna wants lotsa kids. Harry seemed a little out of character there, i cant really see him going that far with hermione when ron is around. But otherwise, awesome, and keep up writing circle's end - i soooo love that fic =) |
Author Feedback: Harry/hermione have actually gone near that far with them near in circle, chapter 40 for instance. |
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aracneSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/05/06
great as always, I do love Ron and LUna together and you always do a wonderful job with them, great great great, keep the cookies coming ok?
huggs |
Author Feedback: Soon |
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Insanely awesome fic! Absolutely loved it, and I loved that it turned into a oneshot, it's more fun. Great job all around, and definitely will look out for those plot points |
Author Feedback: THanks. |
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