Wow. Ok, it was GREAT as one shots, really, but all together it's amazing. I think the last paragraph is one of the most beautiful things I've ever read... seriously. I'm not even going to get in the whole quoting scenario because there are too many, but gosh, you should frame that last paragraph and put it on a wall. I might.

Nice job.. hell if she'd actually waited that week Harry probably would've gone bonkers and tried to find her..

This reads really well all put together, Ama. *is sheepish* No confusion about the timeframe this time. Maybe it was just the fact that you put up the sections over a larger period of time. Maybe I'm just an idiot.

You know all my favorite parts already so I just wanted to give you another pat on the back and tell you what a wonderful job you've done. Keep it up!

Your stories have always touched me with their simplicity and profoundness. This one is the same.

I like the way you describe the setting and how those tie up with the feelings of the characters.

Most especially, I like your titles.

Can't wait for your next story.

I must say that I really enjoyed this piece, especially how you portray the differences in the friendships of Harry and Ron and Harry and Hermione. Even with little dialogue and action this pic had me intrigued and hooked from the very first line. The fact that it's well written helps too! I also like the little symbolism bit you have with Mrs. Cooper in there. I hope to see more from you soon!

I must say, it is well written. You said exactly(well almost exactly) what needed to be said to build up the mood. Interesting story.

It's gorgeous to read it all together, A. *hugs*

I was glad when Hermione decided to stop writing and equally glad when she found that she couldn't. And, of course, she couldn't. As much as we love Harry, he's not likely to find his words at this point. I enjoyed the quiet way that you allowed the light to come on.

Reading your work always feels like gliding through a sunset. Lovely.

Beautiful ideas, musical in its lyricism. Your prose is evocative and atmospheric; its complexities elegant. I couldn't appreciate this one-shot enough. Words without pretentions; everyday images made powerful by seamless emotion and rich meaning.

Thank you for sharing.

Wonderfully written. Flawlessly Harry/Hermione. Amazing concepts.
What's there not to like about this fic...? You've woven together a wonderful piece of work that has ... well, bewildered me beyond belief!
Excellent fic!

You should add something to this maybe change it to a severel chapter fic it could be very good as was this read.