More chapters or leave as a one parter? I'm usually the one whining for more chapters but for once I think this was great as a one parter. Course the greedy side of me would love to have a bit more from this story simply because you told this chapter so well.

nice story, Ilike it as a one-shot but also, think you could make it into 5 chapters no problem. You have quite a bit to build on if you continue.

that started really well, you should definately continue it. i'm really curious about what happened to all their friends and why harry and ron left without hermione

i hope you make it a 5 part fic at least...i think this is a really great intro to a short story - NOT a one shot but maybe 5-8 chapters....yeah - really good work here. detailed, emotional, good hermione writing too, it seems pretty close to what she would do and think and say. i hope you write more to this.
melissa
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