Haunting...but lacking. I like it. Maybe it should be continued...filled in...
Need to know 'what' happened.

though wonderful as a one-shot it would be great to have more... eve just one chapter..
dysfunctionalspirit

I like where this is going. It would be the beginning of a good "years after" story. You should keep it going, but with alot of angst and darkness!

Great story, please do make it at least a few chapters longer. It can't just end here The story deserves to be longer, please

it does work as a one-shot, but you could always make it longer. whatever makes you happy.

Yah can't just leav em 'ere like this, now can yeh? O'course yeh can't. Yer gonna need at least one more chapter.

I think this fic could work well as a one-shot or as a multi-part fic. I like the story though, and would like to read more of it. My only suggestion for future chapters is that you make them a little less wordy. Other than that, great job!

Definitely, this story is gonna be amazing. Please, add another chapter!!

It is good by itself but I think it holds alot of potential for future parts. I will certainly read more if you continue to write. Great Job!

wow that's really fantastic!! it's bitterweet. i love it! great job!^^ great writing!!

I think you should do more like describing Harry's reaction to all he's lost and his and Hermione's route to finding happiness in all that despare.

I definatly think you should carry this story on. Its such a moving piece of writing. I can't wait to find out more!
Coco

You should definately continue. I wanted despirately to read what happened next.

Well done.

Gol

It's nice as a one shot, but it could easily be extended--the premise is very intriguing. I really enjoyed this bit; it was well written and very emotive. The flashback/dream was good too. Was the T.S. quotation your inspiration or just conveniently fitting?

A great story so far please keep up the good work dont leave us hanging