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It's reassuring to see a great R/Lu fic on here. Sometimes I'm not sure if they exist, but here one is. Thoughtful!Ron was a plus. Can't wait until you update "Match"! |
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Like it but I actually think it is still more Harry & Hermione and Ron`s acceptance of their relationship than Ron/Luna, after all it is H & H who kiss and Ron doesn`t get ANY action! Poor old Ronald! I`d love to read another chapter about the trip to Hogsmeade and when H & H get around to spilling the beans! |
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Sage ValeSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/05/06
Awwwww....I am so sorry I haven't been able to read this story...SOLs, hw, projects, and life. My birthday was a week ago!!!! Anyways....this was pretty cutesy patootsy...lol
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I love the story! So positively scrumptious. Luna's in perfect character, by the way. Adorable Ron-realizing-he-doesn't-need-Hermione scene. Love it. Okay, enough ranting. Keep writing and improving!
~ Vi Ke |
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I really like this fic, you did such a lovely job on Luna. Congrats, dear! |
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Very cute; I love R/L fics. You don't see enough of those here at Portkey. But anyways, you write R/L very well. Great job!
~Glitterfairyxoxo |
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Very nice! The background Harry and Hermione was fun, and the Ron/Luna focus was nicely handled. I liked persistent Luna, showing up everywhere, and the description of how Harry and Hermione complete each other was perfect. |
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Harry had always been a bit inept without Hermione…and she never seemed to know quite what to do with herself without Harry. They were rather like two halves of a person, leading somewhat useless lives…but together, they became more…an unstoppable duo. Indeed, it was probably best for both of them if Ron didn’t interfere.
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That is a great line. It has all of this introspective thinking that you don't normally get from Ron, phrased in a way that's just a little too perfect to be his normal dialect, but then you have the unstoppable duo part, and the Ron speaking and the thinking and being suprised to find out that he did in fact actually mean what he said and it all just fits perfectly.
I also love how Ron was so preoccupied with Luna's presense that he didn't notice that she was following him. One way to make sure someone doesnt know your following them is to not be seen, I guess this is taking it to the other extreme. I thought that touch was brilliant and perfect for Ron's character.
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usha88Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/05/06
That was very cute. I loved the R/Lu. You hardly ever see R/Lu fics, and I am glad to read this one. It was very cute. Great job. Loved the title and the whole idea of "ghost fish." |
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fledgeSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/05/06
"Why do you like her?" - I really wonder if JKR has ever asked herself that question, especially when she herself HAS come up with the enlightened revelation that "Harry needs her badly". Lovely little one-shot, even though the title doesn't seem to have much of a connection with the story itself. |
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Quite a nice little piece. I'm not really a fan of Ron and Luna, Ron in particular, but this one was good to read.
Keep up the great work, Ash.
P.S. - Ghost fish, I like it |
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aleungSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/05/06
Nice! Something that JK Rowling should put into the seventh book, just so that H/Hr get together and Ron doesn't get left out. |
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SearcySigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/05/06
LOL...I love this story. Its insanely sublime and perfectly lovely all at once. Kudos to you on doing a smashing job of making his laugh and sigh all at the same time. Wonderful job. |
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