AshlieUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/12/07
loved itttt...it was soooooo cute....!!!  WISH IT WAS A BIT MORE LONGER.... |
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ALbusOOTPUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/05/06
very cute, nice descriptions and simply lovely.
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-Albus |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/05/06
it was so beautiful!!!! you must write more! I'll be waiting! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/05/06
I'm thinkin that this story is pretty good.......however, I'm thinkin that's more like a G rated story instead of a PG rated story.
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EschivaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/05/06
sweet and yes totally cutesy, but still very good. i liked the beginning better than the rest of it, but that's just me.
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This is awesome. Nice job! I like it very much, it's really sweet. Although I noticed one grammar mistake, but that's ok, one, no big deal. Keep up the great work! I look forward to reading your next fanfics. |
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wreniferSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/05/06
Very cute and fluffy. Though every once in a while your tenses were off. Things like mine or me instead of her. But other than that it was great.  |
Author Feedback: Yeah, I thought I caught all of them but I just went back and re-read it and fixed the last few. If there are any more, let me know. I kind of started writing the story a long time ago in third and when I was finishing it the other day I accidently switched halfway through so I had to go back and fix it. Apparently I didn't read carefully enough.
Thanks for letting me know! |
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Yeah, I agree about the ending...it just kind of runs off, but doesn't clearly finish.
Anyways, it was lovely and oh-so-cute. I really liked how attuned she is with him. |
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for me i dont think anything should be change for i think it the whole thing was brilliant and ironic as it may sound i think it's perfect...
great job and i hope you will make more fics like this, short but great.
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This was utterly adorable, and the imagery was incredibly good. |
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Lovely. Simply lovely. I loved the descriptions of the park, and the meadows, and the sunset. I'd love a proposal like that. So simple, and beautiful, and one to remember forever.
Amazing.
Keep on writing!
Love, Amanda |
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