"two teenagers crazy in love." I love that line! Yet another wonderful little one-shot, I'm becoming quite adicted to your Lily/James tales.

Actually, I foudn this fic to be quite adorable and believable. James was yummy...very witty and still cute *dreamy sigh....* Keep up the good work, and go bloody ice skating if you want to!

Hey, I liked it. What else can I say? Oh.... I wouldn't have given the cloak back either, lol
Cheers, Moon

I hope thatyou will be able to get out of your writing disabilities or whatever you want to call it. I think you wrote a great story disabilitie or not. Is James and Lily's relationship a secret or smething because lily doesn't want to be caught with him or is it just because they are heads and shouldn't be doing things like that? (Really long question, I know)

Lovely little fic. Love the cuddling thingy. You are brilliant at writing LJ fluff. And that is entirely positiv.

Lovely, just lovely. I love it.

And, wow, you crack me up. :]

*squeals* awww, that was sooooooooo cute!!
aww, makes me feel like i wanna cuddle someone!!
but no, unfortunately, he's not here,............
anyway,....... YOU RULE!!!

AWW this was so cute! lol so as always mate wicked job and cont' writing!! kk later

What a cute story! I really enjoyed reading it. Great job, keep writing!

I loved the story and enjoyed reading it. I hope you come up with another story just as good sometime soon

Hey. Madd fic. So cute, true too- guys don't seem to do anything unless the female will somehow indicate/hint towards it. Writing was supurb!
Keep it up
-Spyro

This left me wit a lovely warm fuzzy geeling in my stomach, it's written beautifully. It was such a lovely one-shot...very in tune with cannon. ^-^

awww...so sweet I loved it and I love Sarah Brightman I'm surprised that Sirius didn't tease Lily and who is Marcus?

Very well done. Nice take on how things began for Lily and James.

I just love your fics...they are so adorable! and now I feel like cuddling lol.
Hope you update the other stories though Nice job!