Really nice story! This is sometimes how I see it happening, too. Other times (like in the story I'm writing), they've already discovered that they're meant to be together and _then_ they win the war against Tom.
However - I like what you've written here and I'm glad that you took the time to put pen to paper. It's gentle, sweet, and good.
Thanks!
the_scibbler
|
| |
shshshSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/04/07
Awesome !
Great fic as always !
I liked the part about Harry not liking wild ones but instead he loved the smart brainy ones.
Never seen a fic with this theme before.
Keep writing! |
| |
Ohh I loved that! Relatively short, but got the point across perfectly! I loved the idea of that story - and the way Harry set her straight at the end
You're a wonderful writer - I can't wait to read more of your stories!
-Michelle |
| |
AWW!! thats just the right word todescribe this one shot...aww. I loved it! it was cute and fluffy and everything that a great harry and hermione story should be! Harry was caring and cute and happy...oh how I love stories where harry is happy! Great job...I loved it!!!
Michelle |
| |
|
Aww, very cute. He likes her just the way she is! And he's such a gentleman too. Lovely. |
| |
|
very cute, love the fluff... though I admit, drinking to such an extent was a little bit TOO out of charachter for Hermione (not something I particularly like either...) but it was really cute and a fun read. Good job! |
| |
DarkHarrySigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/05/06
Hazzaa!!!!! that's a great story! If you ever need a Beta reader let me know! BTW if i get approved as an author would you honor me by being a Beta Reader? |
| |
|
All I can say for this is "awwww!" I really like it--I like how Harry's not all moody after Voldie is dead--that he can have a life. I like his matter-of-fact attitude with Hermione, too. Great Job! |
| |
usha88Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/05/06
That was really cute. I don't know if drinking so much you get completely drunk is taking a wild side, well yes it is, but I am glad that H/Hr got together in the end. It was cute. |
| |
AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/05/06
ahhhh how sweet gagging here p.s.what HAPPENED TO RON AND IF HARRY HAS ADDMITTED HIS UNDINYING LOVE \FOR HERMIONE WHAT IS THERE CHILD GOING TO LOOK LIKE (ALL READERS GASP) |
| |
|
Aww, I loved it! Only Harry's smart enough to love Hermione for who she really is. Well done! |
| |
|
‘No… I feel like sleeping a bit more… will you join me?’
‘This time, Miss Granger, I will,’ he said, kissing her softly. ‘After all, you’re just my type- except when you take a walk on the wild side.’
hehehe, loved it! |
| |
Very sweet  Though i'd have prefered it a bit longer. Over all it was a very good story. |
| |
Sweet! Loved it, and Hermione drinking is the funniest thing ever  Great job! |
| |
lzodSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/05/06
*G* That was adorable. Too bad she didn't throw up on Ron! *EG* That would have been classic!
Lisa |
| |
|