That was cute. Very cute. I like how you had each chapter dedicated to one couple.

Whoa! That was rather quick. Just one question: why do you make Hermione so physically perfect?

heh heh he h eh hehehehe heh eh eh hee he he e heeh saaawwweeeeettttt!!!!

I really liked how you went from one couple to the other. Great work weaving the threads together. Youhave a interesting imagination and are wonderful with words.

very very cute start. Just like a first kiss should be.

that was super cute. i loved it. you know i think you have real talent. keep writing. id love to read more of you work.

You paint a nice picture when you're describing things. Punctuation a bit distracting at times; you've got a 'too many commas here, not enough there' kind of thing going. A bit of a quick shock at the end there with them jumping into each other's arms!

I love Ron and Luna. Oh, and I still have more chapters waiting.

Pam

Oh my! I don't know what to think about all that. I guess I'm off to the next chapter to see where all of this is going!

Pam

Don't listen to that last review. There is not a lot of fluff in any of these stories, that's what make them so good. They have a good amound of plot to balance it out. I think they are amazing and don't let anyone, ANYONE!!, tell you differently. keep writing exactly as you have been!

I think I just threw up alittle in my mouth. All that mushy gushyness between Harry and Hermione. I think I have just been turneed off of shipping H/HR. Is that bad?

H/G all the way!

Good story though I guess ifr you just take away that awful fluff.

"In their fourth year year Luna and Ginny had been among Harry's rescue party when he'd attempted to save his godfather from Voldemort's clutches, the experience had cemented a bond between the group."


I think you mean fifth.

I see now it's a collection of stories one stranger than the next.

But yet I keep reading because I really like them. It's different but wow I really like em!

It was good until the ending becuase I got very confused.

I had to go back and read and I mean just making out in the library Hermione would be like dude harry what in the world but than again she was in total suprise..

I dunno just very OOC but hey it happens.

I shall read on to see what happens next.

"Ron will be fine, and I presently could care less who Ginny is snogging, what concerns me at the moment is snogging you”

These are my favorite words on this entire chapter! Now, if only JKR would take a hint. In all honestly, these three are my preferred pairings. Thanks for writing it!

A Very sweet story. Made me chuckle and i liked the descriptions. Well done, even though i'm usually a Ginny and Draco person you made Neville sound fanciable. Bravo and quite an interesting plot. Definately like how the three all interconnected, had a tamora pierce feel to it. I'll stop ranting and just say it was amazing!!!