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wow thats about the saddest thing i've ever read, hoob. truly. i dont even know. good job tho. i like it |
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oooh wowowowwowow intense i cried it was fantasically good i loved it  |
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Wow... just wow... dunno, I hate the 10 word minimum count, but thats the only way to describe it... |
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VanillaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/01/07
Wow. That is the only word I can think of to describe this story. It was beautifully written, and so intense. I loved it. Great job!! |
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vnscecileUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/01/07
OMG!
You made me cry!
I loved the sad/happy ending!
keep writing...
(must add some words to have the review posted) |
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davekSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/11/06
Bit sad story. I firt tought I had read it already. But no that was a similair story. Hermoine left her and harry money to dobby and winky.Pity there was no follow up about the elfs I am going to read the sequel now. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/08/06
ohgosh, error, just realized I wrote ' it had some much depth' in my review, I meant SO MUCH depth LOL. Awesome job hon.
xo
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/08/06
"No," he repeated, and then paused with that damn smile still on his face. "No, I will not love you forever." As her eyes filled with tears the smile that had graced his face vanished .He reached out and gently caressed her cheek, his mood solemn, while looking at her with a very serious expression on his face and said, "I will love you for all eternity."
Awwwwwwwwwww that is so sweet! I loved your story, it had some much depth. Just beautiful. Thank you for reccing it to me!
xo
o_lonelily @ LJ |
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A very sad but beautiful little story. I hope to see more from you. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/05/06
nice very sad and happy at the same time too muck death though |
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BethanyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/05/06
this is the saddest fic i have ever read!!!!!harry dies and his last words are "we will be together again"? that is sad and romantic at the same time (mostly sad!). i m still crying  !
i luv how hermione killed herself (that is SO sad!!  ) and then she went to her dream wedding and harry was all healthy and happy! that is just so sad!
there are not enough words to describe how tragic this fic is! it is awesome!
i will be lookiy 4 more fics from u! u r a gr8 writer! |
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i dont know wether i should be crying or jumping for joy...it's so sad yet there happy there too.. i clam it sappy.. in a good way .. yes..
ramble on
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Author Feedback: Thanks that is the point. It is sad but I couldn't have it go with out the happy. You know it is called Harmony... Thanks for the review. I appreciate it.
HHr 4ever...and ever and ever and ever...
Hooobajube
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Omg I cried lol  lolBut I loved it !! I have never read a story like this one when both of them died or one of them died, I didnt want to but Im glad that I did caus it was pretty amazing ! |
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puck_ncSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/05/06
(Suggestion: I second the reviewer who said you should have a warning at the top of the story itself, maybe specifically mentioning caracter suicide. It's a potential trigger for some readers.)
If this is your first fic, it speaks well of your writing talent. You packed a lot of emotion into a short space and your writing has a good flow to it. I'm looking forward to more from you.
One very picky nit: "looking at her self in the mirror" - herself is one word.
Thanks very much for sharing your story! |
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malzUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/05/06
Normally stories don't really have much of an effect on me, mainly sad ones, but this one was amazing and I kind of feel like crying right now, which you should take a bow for because I am practically a robot lol |
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