Hehe, I loved that! It's interesting seeing a bit of a different version of the very first Harry Potter book... there have been lots of 5th year and 6th year stories, etc... but I don't think I've ever seen a story which contained the events of Harry, Hermione, and Ron's FIRST year at Hogwarts...
I really like what you've done with this story in general, though it's been very brief and rushed so far, but I assume you are doing it that way purposely until you get into the trio's later years at Hogwarts (where the books hadn't gone yet - or where they had gone, but need to be changed for the sake of us Harmonians)... and then I assume you'll slow it down a bit...
You've been doing a great job with this story so far!
I can't wait to find out what happens later on - mainly once you get through all the basic events that had happened in earlier books and get to the things that you will be adding later on...
I look forward to the next chapter!
Please update very soon!
-Michelle