love the diea and story of behind the scenes with ron and luna...very well done and creative

Hi! Well that was just an awesomely steamy chapter. The teacher and student role playing I think is one of my favorite fantasies. I cant wait to read more. Update again soon, until then, Byes

This is a really fun piece. Poor Ron and grading homework. Luna is adorable.

Wow that was powerful! I do so love them together! That is how it should be. They complete each other, Ron needed to lightened by her and she needed to be grounded by him. Harry needed Hermione's love and loyalty nad Hermione needed Harry's unconditional love, acceptance and strength. How do the other ships not see this? I am thrilled a brilliant writer like you sees it and shares these stories with us! Thanks!

Well well, another Weasley or two on the way eh?? That was really explainative on how Ron and Luna are doing. I thought Ron might have some protective feeling over Harriet and her close relationship with Sirius. Great Job!!!

Love Amanda

You have to love Luna. Great scene, and love the fact that they want more children. It\'s also great to see their bond, and silent communication. It may have taken a bit longer, but then, they weren\'t friends for years before getting together. Love that you use orange as it goes so well with Ron.

Really nice story I usually don't think about Ron being much of a romantic touch, but I think that the Ron/Luna pairing makes a great deal of sense and I'm really happy you tackled it!

Your writing is really good and I've always said to you that you have a great talent with dialog. Nothing is going to come close to your work on 'Circle's End', but it's great to see you still writing and adding to the HP universe

Regards,

the_scribbler

There is something a little weird about Luna role-playing, though. She kinda does that already when she's lucid and normal!

Though I must say, all joking aside, that her heartfelt, serious words really were touching and fit her character well.

It's interesting to see how the darkness of the other world they lived in for so long still shadows them, even after their return. They both spent almost half of their entire lives and most of their adult lives in a very different dark and stark place. I can really feel for Luna when she decides not to use the inconcievous charm. In CE there was that wonderful scene (easily in my top ten of all time literary scenes- sorry, Mike, Seneca and Faulkner still beat you!) where Luna declares to Ron that she wants a family- the yearning in her voice has stayed with me through this fic, and its good to see you doing the same as the writer. Another Weasley/Lovegood sprog! I'm stoked! Anna can feel for him/her, having a sister who's so much more older than yourself.

Of course, an interesting question is, since the two of them spent so much time in that bleak alternate universe- which has more or less consumed their lives up until their recent return- that they have a different yard stick to measure things with. While the growing danger is ominious to Harry, Emilia, and Hermione, maybe to Ron and Luna it's not as bad. It's not GOOD, of course, but they come from a rougher place.

What is really amazing, is that, in the face of a dire, uncertain future, there are people who let life go on and seek purposefully to create new life, to have that hope for the future that there will be others. This is rather subtle, but effective nonetheless.

The editing and spelling in this chapter was great - no problems at all compared to your last LG chapter. Very good!

The Kincaid family has a crest to go on the LG family tree! Have you seen it yet!?

I love these vignettes and the relationship between Luna and Ron, how she strengthens him and he grounds her. I love that Harriet is a blending of both her parents, and not just a Mini-Luna. Well done as always.

Hmmm...it definitely is interesting to see how they got the the alternate universe. Brilliant writing!

I think it is cute how he calls her 'Loony' in a loving way.

This was the first Ron and Luna pairing that I have read...aside from within other stories. Very cute...loved it!

What a lovely little fragment. It fills in a few plot holes and when Ron touches Luna's stomach and asks about their daughter was just a beautiful- it really pulled at my heartstrings. I hope to get to see more of these kind of moments in "Glass" and elsewhere, since you do them so well.

The world they have been drawn into is very interesting, sorta like the Bizarro Sunnydale from "Buffy" in its bleakness. You create the mood of that kind of place wonderfully in your opening paragraphs.

As usual, can't wait to see more. Ron and Luna are just as interesting-- even "dead"!

I loved it, although the beginning was a little gross, but of course thats fine. Please write another

Oh, it is as I had hoped it would be! They did not die after all. Will we hear more from them? Will you be putting them into your new story? I hope so. I am thrilled for this chapter!