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He Takes the Cake

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midnight ink
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/08/07
I really liked it, would have liked to know how Saturday went but then I have a pretty good imagination so I'll just let it run wild
 

nlovewithHP77
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/07/06
very cute story. i am glad i took the time to read it. i just love your stories, they are always so cute. i can't wait to read more. thanks for writing.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/05/06
I love it!! Why not continue!!! I just felt that i was left hanging at the end there. Continue please!
 

hermione278
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/05/06
I think its great, but as a chapter story rather than a one-shot.
 

loonymoony8
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/05/06
Very good as always! Nice job! I don't watch "Sex and the City," sorry, so I wouldn't know what episode it is. But keep up the way awesome work!! Gonna write any other James/Lily stories?
 

maddudewalking
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/05/06
AWW yea i rem that episode! This was a good one shot! lol but as always mate wicked job and cont' writing! kk later
 

Mani12191
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/05/06
I should be doing my English homework and studying for it but I just had to read this.
I thought it was pretty cute! But what on earth happened the first time around when they broke up? That might've been interesting to know.
Great job on the one-shot!
 

kat black
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/05/06
once again...loved it!! you know you should do ur homework and stuff...but i am gald u blew it of to right this gave me something to do cuz im sick! . oh well see ya next story!

all my love
Kat Black

Sirius is STILL mine!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/05/06





this was sooooooo incredibly good!! i loved it soooo much!! i wish it was more than a one-shot, and i hope you update again soon/write more. and what about ur other stories that aren't one-shots like triwizard and rude? please update those tooo!! looooooooove your writing!
 

Azusena
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/05/06
That was really good i totally loved it brilliant job!! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
 

Lauren_Dawnie
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/05/06
You spin such a witty and funny story. I really enjoyed it...
 

Forever Optimistic
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/05/06
I would love to read a continuation of this, perhaps another chapter or two. I love the dialogue between the two, great job.
 

PotterChick958
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/05/06
heh. This was cute. But I'me curious. Why did Lily and James break up the first time, causing Lily to knee James? Because that's pretty harsh.

I thought it was cute how Lily was spazing out on her friend's wedding day, and ended up being the one that needed comfort. As was James forever forgetting the cake.

I also liked the Option A, B, C line. Thought that was well written.

And now, like you, I must get back to history. Enough procrastination for me! Because I'm tired and need sleep. AND my throat hurts. BAH.

Love, Amanda
 

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