This is just awesome. I... wow. I can't put into words just how good this is. Perhaps a smiley can help me...
Well, that didn't really get the message across. seriously though, This is my list of favorite authors as of June 18:
1. Phillip Pullman
2. J. R. R. Tolkien
3. Chocchip
4. J. K. Rowling
5. Anthony Horowitz
That list of great authors should give you an idea of how awesome you are. I think that you should write for a living if (gasp) you aren't already. Really. An author this good deserves much more than a place in Portkey.org. That doesn't mean you shouldn't write a sequel.
Which brings us to my next point. WRITE A SEQUEL!!!! This is unbelievably good. It's one of the best stories I have ever read in my life. You'd better keep writing!