I really like this story, not what I was expecting from the title and sumary but it doesn't matter because I thought it was great. I look forward to reading the next chapter. Keep up the good work. xxx

This is so sad :'[
There really is no other way to put it.
I can't believe she died.
I like the way you ended the chapter.
With Harry.

Far below, a lone figure crouched over a makeshift grave.




Harry.




“It must be nice to be missed,”

this is very well written... I enjoyed every moment I spent reading this piece. I applaud the writer's brilliance... ahehehe enough with the formalities.... awesome work... you deserve a gazillion thumbs up!!!!

Wow this is really different. I like it a lot. It's an interesting idea how Hermione can't move on until Harry let's her go...

I'm liking this story. It's very well-written and that is one of the aspects that I truly like about it. It also has a good plotline.

Please continue as soon as you get the time.

I can't wait to read more.

,
Caity

please update soon, this is a very intriguing begining, I can't believe though that hermione is dead, anyway, yeah, please please update soon, I can't wait to see whats going to happen

How sad? Interesting, I never thought of Hermione dying and becoming a Hogwarts ghost. Wouldn't Harry see her around the castle? Well maybe not if he doesn't go into the girls restroom. What would he do if he saw her as a ghost? Great chapter I look forward to the next chapter.

That was really sad. I really want to see what happened. I can't wait to see why Hermioen didn't move on. HOw horrible to be stripped away from all emotions. Great job with the first part.

Wow, that was really amazing! While Hermione was forgetting everything, I was thinking in my head, "No no no!" I love how you can evoke such raw emotion with such few words. I completely understand that the thing we often refer to as a "life" sometimes gets in the way of updating, but I will be here when you do! ~Ronnie

This is a really great idea itotally can't wait to see where your going with this awesome job i love it so far! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Oh my poor Hermione!!! Oh, you should add more warning. too much sadness over a lunch break.

This was interesting. I've actually never read a ghost-fic before, so I'm intrigued as to where you're going with it, and how it will all turn out. I'll definitely be back for any other chapters!

OMG!

Have some of the authors got together and decided to have a death-fest? This is the 3rd one today!

Although I like your writing style, I'm just not into Hermione dying. It's too sad.

OH wow!!! Oh so much heartache for these two. Have this overwhelming urge to scream for the anguish that has been cause. but love it all the same.

I'm really not a fan of angst, but since you were the author I figured I would give it a try. As expected it's well written, but heart-wrenchingly sad as well. I think it's a bit too emotional for my taste, but it was really well done.