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First off, there is no such thing as too much Dr. Pepper or ice cream (but not together: Dr. Pepper floats are not as good as they sound). Anyway, lovely story. Very sad at the beginning, the flashback, and right after the flashback, but the ending was adorable and sweet. Wonderfully written, too! |
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I don't cry. But I so cried. I love that this really could have happened. Is Harry the result of an interior design critique gone awry?!  Heh, in any case, it was an amazing story. Congratulations, I loved it. |
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EschivaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/05/06
great story! one of the best you've written, and that is saying something. i like lily's decision, and the almost wallpaper discussion at the end of the story.  |
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Ooh, that was wicked. ANd sweet, and I felt so bad for her.. but then good.. so yay! |
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Nezy4evaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/05/06
Darnit. I forgot to add it to my favorites when I reviewed a minute ago. *growls* Yeah, well, it was still pretty sweet, cha know.  |
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Nezy4evaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/05/06
This was a brilliant piece. Honestly, when I read this was the product of dr. pepper, chocolate ice cream, and a late night, I thought it would've been...well, hyper. Lol, I still thought it was great though.  |
Author Feedback: I tend to make it a policy not to write when hyper because many random things come out...  a great example of this is chapter 9 of my chapter fic semele perdita...how much more random can you get *shakes head at self* |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/05/06
man this was so cute and so sad i was like james  but im glad they got back together in the end well done and give us more one shots xXx |
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You should have put a big warning on the sumarry to this story that it was a tear jerker. I was crying half way though this one shot (I'm so pathetic). It was written beautifully, and I love the storyline(and that it didn't deviate from cannon *grins*). I hope to read some more one-shots of yours. |
Author Feedback: Hehe, well that was a surprise.  Thanks for reading and there's a few already posted on my author profile here and some on my livejournal as well  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/05/06
awwww this was really really really cute, i liked it very much!!! good job! |
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AzusenaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/05/06
That was awesome you did really great job on it, i usually don't like lily/james but that was great  ! ! ! ! ! !! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! |
Author Feedback: Aww, you usually don't like L/J? they're my favorite but H/Hr runs a close second I just don't write about them as much. This was actually going to be a H/Hr story but then I changed my mind because it flowed better as an L/J |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/05/06
It really was sweet. I enjoyed it; and I'd comment more, but it's time for me to leave for school. |
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This was so sweet. It's been a while since
I've read a one-shot here, and I really enjoyed this one. Great job. |
Author Feedback: I'm glad you stopped in to read then Thanks for reviewing! |
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