This chapter sucked. Want to know why it sucked? Because you had Harry, an AUROR which is SUPPOSED to be the same as a wizarding policeman, standing there doing nothing while ron beat hermione. Then to add insult to injury, you say St. Mungos won't allow him to see her?

HELLO (KNOCKS ON YOUR HEAD)
Can you say "Ongoing Investigation" and she's the victim? Oh and why didn't he arrest the bugger? Don't you know what auror is?

This chapter stank, I'm almost afraid to read further.

HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO HERMIONE!!!!! RON WOULD NEVER EVER PURPOSELY HURT HER. ARE YOU SOME TWISTED, SADISTIC CREEP?!?! IF YOU ARE GOING TO WRITE SOMTHING SO TERRIBLY WRONG, KEEP IT TO YOURSELF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

thanks for writing. i enjoyed reading but it could have had more excitement.

Wow! What a wonderful story.. This is cool even though Ron died..
But you know, I loved this.. 10/10 for you!

Really sad when she found out! and harry was such a cutey about the whole thing!
i agree; physically R/H would never have that happen to them, but emotionally! it would soooooo be possible!

good FF!
~Alexa.

Sweet epilogue with lots of happy fluff.

When I read the initial description of this story, I was admittingly hesitant. I know you said it's heavy R/Hr with a H/Hr ending; wasn't sure if I could survive the R/Hr. Now that I've finished it I'm glad to of read it, was a delightfully good story, saddened by the bad guy Ron version but for this story it had to happen.

I loved the Epilogue, nice twist on ending with Hr POV, it was nice to 'hear' her feelings.

that was so cool . i mean i like dthe way how hermion e and harry are getting closer. but could yu have ron being jealous of harry more please?

OMG! This is fantastic.....I love, love, love it!!! The writting is great and the story has me coming back for more....

Oh, I knew it! Can't wait to read the rest when I get home....

So far so good, I'm LOVING IT!.... I don't know how much I'll get to right now since I'm at lunch, at work, but I can't wait to read this through. (I will finish it today!) You've got me: "hook, line and sinker:.....

Just found your story this morning, and wanted to let you know that I enjoyed it very much. It had everything I could want in a story: angst, romance, and a little laughter thrown in too.

Great job with this, especially with it being about a sort of sensitive subject too. You handled the abuse part very well, it was very believable. Harry's inability to see it right away, yet know on some level something was wrong, was very much a real reaction.

I'll have to check out some of your other stories as well. Again, great job!

~Cat

While I felt that Ron was completely out of character, I did truly enjoy the love story that developed between Harry and Hermione. Very sweet.

It was a little disturbing that Ron did that but I don't think I can honestly say if his jeasously of Harry and Hermione wouldn't have pushed him to something like that. In all he would do something stupid and it would of pushed them closer to each other.

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