JeffUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 05/09/09
Excellent story, I really enjoyed your writing. Using Kate to remind Harry how much Hermione meant to him was an interesting technique. More could have been done to examine Hermione's new relationship with her cousin. It seems any relationship between Kate and her parents, especially her Dad was ignored. While not important to the overall story, you've forced H/Hr into a surrogate parent situation that didn't seem necessary. |
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Raven3182Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 25/01/09
This is a very good little story. I really liked Kate aka Hermione II. I enjoyed reading this little gem. Thank you! |
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You were jealous of me for standing out and I was jealous of you for fitting in. What a pair we are
lol, isnt it always like thaat tho? |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 23/10/08
THis is SOOOO Wonderful. I may be a little selfish though because I think Kate and Harry's relationship is too close and there's no mentioning in this last chapter that Harry and Hermione are together-------and Kate told the new people she met that Harry and Hermione are best friends, I think you should add best friends AND lovers, or something that says they are in love madly? Anyway, I loved the previous chapter more. But this is really a well written Fanfic!!!  |
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cdanesSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 04/08/08
\"I’ve had some of my best memories here: fantastic feasts, grand balls, serious discussions with people who’ve been dead for hundreds of years\"
that made me laugh for a good five minutes.
really great story, I looooved it!!!! |
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sorry for pointless review just want this back on my favourites list. |
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Nice epilogue! I was amused when i realized you had written about kate's days at hogwarts but i like the idea. Like i said before, i enjoyed this story a lot and i certainly hope you'll write more  Luv you! |
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That was absolutelly fantastic!! I think for someone who is not used to write fluff you made it pretty good. My favorite part, i believe, was the curious fact of the ring, i had never read anything like it and i enjoyed it a lot. |
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I guess, taking back when you were talking about the point of view, that it was confusing to other people, i could easily understand everything and i like the way you played with it. Excellent chapter, better than the previous ones. |
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Nice chapter! I like the way the story is developing and kate's character, pretty much like hermione (and me often) |
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As soon as i read the review i knew i had to read this and here i am. I like this chapter, it's well written and seems really interesting. I only hope following chapters will be too. |
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chelley83Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 21/11/07
i thought that this story was really cute, thanks so much for writing it and sharing it with us...can't wait to read more of your stuff |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 18/10/07
The story is good, but seems to be not finished yet. I would love to know what Harry and Hermione have, what happens with kate and Phillip, and all of that. Hopefully you will write a sequel to this story?? Keep up the good work, and as always...God Bless!! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 09/10/07
Well, this was a really sweet story. I really enjoyed it. |
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everyone started calling me The Chosen One,because it named as the only person who could defeat him.
I think you mean because it named 'me' as the only person...
I like Harry's speech about Hermione and how she showed up in the middle of it. |
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