AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/06/06
It was so sad
You are deffinatly a talented write it was short and sweet |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/05/06
wow...this story almost made me cry. Not the bad kind of cry but the "this is such a good but sad story" kind of cry. I love your stories. |
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ohh... this is so tragic but very well written... i enjoyed reading this even if it almost made me teary eyed.  . very well written ... |
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usha88Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/05/06
How horribly depressing. Killed by a drunk driver...and yes it is anticlimatic. If she survived the war, and killed by some stupid mistake. I do like this fic and am glad that you wrote it. It gets a message out to people. Great job.
I love your Phermone! That's a great story. I had almost forgottena bout it. I do hope you update soon.  |
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stu14688Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/05/06
Good greif! You've ripped my heart out! That is so sad! All of that, and the drunk driver still lived! How could you!? That's just horrible, but what's even more horrible is that it happens every day. Stupid people making stupid decisions and breaking lives like that! That makes me mad! (Which, by the way, means that you did a very good job at writing this story.)
Keep up the good, but please make the next one happier. |
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That was such a sad story,  . Though, it was so good, and well written. I wished you would make a new chap, or story like this!!!
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Awesome JOB!!!
Ms Muggle Girl |
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I like how its anticlimatic, it adds to the horror. His refusal to deal at the end is so tragic, yet I love how it ends with his promise. |
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Wow, that was powerful, and almost made me cry at the ending. It seems so hard to accept the things that hurt the most as truth. I really liked this story, but I wish it had been just a bit longer descriptive-wise.
Very nicely done.
Katie |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/04/06
oh my god!this is so sad. i hope this never happens to anyone. it just seems so, awful. |
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omg...i'm crying!!  heehe...but it was a good fic nonetheless...kinda sad...but it was nice...ehehheeh... |
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Very sad and angsty, but an important point. My aunt was killed in an accident with a drunk driver, and the idea that something so stupid could destroy such a wonderful, active, alive person is just too hard to wrap your mind around. |
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DylanUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/04/06
I read the a/n and decided not to read the story.
I hate character deaths. Maybe you should put that in your summary and not in the a/n.
Now I'm off to find some real fluffy romance. |
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*Applauds you for writing this* As sad as it was, the message is loud and clear. I'm very glad you wrote it. Speaking as someone who's life has been effected by drunk drivers more than once it makes me happy to know that someone is passing the message along not to drive while drunk. Thanks so much. |
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sherylSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/04/06
I nearly cried  . That's a lovely, well not in the pleasant sense, story. The intensity of it all just bouncing off your words, so beautifully written.
Poor Hermione
So sad...makes me glad i don't drink or drive. Poor Harry, having to go through that.
Great story.
Take care and keep it up!!
Sheryl |
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 I...doin't you hate it when somthing is so good yet so sad and you don't know what to say? Well I do and thats whats happening here. Great job.---Tiger111991 |
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