I stumbled upon this story and absolutely loved it. I thought it was funny and charming at the same time. Thanks for a great read!

lol.
That is one of the cutest proposal fics I've read! (And I've read a lot.) I love the idea of Hermione proofreading Harry's proposal and how he can't get anything out besides, 'will you marry me, please.' After all, for them, they don't need the fancy words or big gestures, do they?

Little things I noticed:
Harry's smiled just got brighter--> you mean, 'Harry's smile just got brighter...'

And "Where do you think you're going, we just got engaged!" should be two different sentences, or separated by a semicolon and not just a comma.

(Sorry, I'm an anal-retentive English major.)

Very cute-- and I just love the quotes!

i love this story n its companion piece its so adorable

Omg I'm so sorry if my reply sounded sarcastic. woops. Its quite hard to convey emotion on the screen. aha. No you should definately take it as a compliment. I loved it.

omg this should be put to report for extreme fluff. I swear to god, its like ridiculous.

“To go get this framed.”
LOL jajaja i loved it ti was fluffy but not that fluffy i really love it and the way he just say yo frame it lol

Sweet! Very very sweet! I love how Harry can't get past the question. It sums up his need for directness quite well. And i like your depiction of Hermione.

I absolutely loved that! It worked very nicely as a companion fic to 'Cliche'
It was very sweet and cute, and I absolutely love fluff
You're a great writer!

-Michelle

Oh wow. That is soo.... soo.... unbelievably.... cute-adorable-mindboggling-aurgh! Loved it

Hehehe..I think that you are checking your reviews as I am reading your stories. Well, that is quite interesting. Well, I thought this was quite lovely. Though, I want to say that I've read this one before, who konws. Whatever...I want to finish all your others ones.

Awwwwwww! That was so cute! I love the to get this framed bit, wonderful!

(for some reasons, my reviews have been getting cut off..)I think it's brilliant how you thought of that kind of plot. It's exceptionally original and very sweet.
And i'm going to agree with eveyone else says in the review, "To go get this frame."

lol FLUFFNESS!! It's so damn adorable!! ^____^
I was really confused with scratch out part then I read the reviews, and figured it out. (lol i'm dense like that >W

OH! I loved this!!! ^^
So sweet and Hermione's correction was very in-character
The ending was cute too.

haha, that was amusing to read!! ha, he was gonna have it framed,..... weird
jeez, ur good at writing those kissing scenes!!