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Cool. I liked this story. Could it be because I also have trouble sleeping... I think it might be. lol
Cheers, Moon |
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That was so sweet! I loved it. They're so cute together. I'm such a fan of Lily and James, and alot of the fan fics I've read just don't measure up to my standards (I'm a sucker for much-too-fluffy romances) but this one was absolutely perfect. You're a great writer and you definitely have talent. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/09/06
HOT!!!!! U R SO GD AT THIS IT SEXY. I WHAT U IN MY BED |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/08/06
Deny it all you want, but the fanfiction story was posted years before the portkey one that you "wrote". I have a hard time believing that an adult as you claim to be would steal a story, which you have. And for the record: im posted as Anonymous because i dont have a login name for this site. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/08/06
I read this exact smae story on fanfiction.net. since apparently you cant write for yourself, stick to reading fics and stop stealing and plagerizing! |
Author Feedback: For your information, I wrote this myself. If this is on fanfiction.net than it was stolen from ME! How dare you accuse me of stealing someone elses story! Have the guts to at least say who you are, not just Anonymous! And please post a link to the story- I just searched and I cannot find it on there.
I can assure you that I wrote this story. I can tell you where I wrote it, how I came up with the idea and everything. I DO NOT STEAL OTHER PEOPLES WORK!!!
So have the guts to tell me who you are next time and stop calling me a liar. I'm not like all the other little teenie-boppers on here- I'm an adult with my own life and i have far better things to do than steal other peoples work. In fact, my search on FF.net was the first time I have visited that site in almost two years.
So go bite my arse and crawl back into the hole that you came from. |
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StarlightUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/06/06
I really liked this one. I'm always searching for a good Lily/James fic because I love them and my search led me to your story, which is good!! I loved the chemistry you established and the sweetness of it.
Random comment to the anonymous person who asked if they would really wait a year...I think James loved Lily enough to wait even five years, lol. So what if he's James...he'd wait. ^^
Anyway, great job! I loved it!   |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/06/06
Wow! I liked it. The James/Lily Chemitry was good and the whole 'first time' thing was perfect. Overall sweet little fic.   |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/06/06
That was amazing what a good story I don't usually read L/J when they are already together but I'm glad I read your story I loved it you did an amazing jod.Oh and I love the song. |
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This was a very cute story and i can't wait to read more of your story. i really like how lil can't sleep but she really just came with a whole plan already set. please write more like this soon. |
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Very realistic. Good job, hope to see more of your work soon. |
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Gah! this was so impossibly cute, I just love it. |
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That was great. I love all lilly/james fics and this one was really sweet. You should really consider writing more L/J fics because you were great with this one.Have you ever tried any longer fics? well i think you have what it takes to write more in-depth stories, so you might want to consider them too. Wonderful job!
magical_me |
Author Feedback: I have written longer fics in the past- a couple of H/Hr and a Lily/Severus one (I love Lily/Severus  ). However now I simply just don't have the time- and add on the fact that my partner doesn't know about my fic writing habits  so I can only write/post when he's not around.
I'm just about to start posting my longest H/Hr one and it's sequel though  |
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Very good! It's written well. Oh cool, you actually have a story named, "Romeo and Juliet?" I'm reading that in school right now. I love reading James/Lily fanfics so if you write more of these then I would definitely read and review them. |
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HarryluvrSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/04/06
this was hot and steamy! keep up the really great work and write more fanfictions! |
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I'm so sorry, please ignore the second half of my last review. I wasn't paying attention to what I was doing.  However the first have was completely intended. |
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