BingblotSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/05/07
Oh, very hot and very powerful.
I like how Hermione wants to get over her addiction to Harry (nice way of putting it-- I'm sure it would be like an addiction) but she can't. It seems very Hermione-like. I love the phrase of 'the me only you get to see'-- yes, that is exactly what I like to think of for them, that with each other, they show sides of themselves that no one else ever sees. |
Author Feedback: I like to think of them that way as well. Thanks. |
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once again it's amazing, I love it, the description, the lyrics... the story
you're a wonderful author
I love it
please keep itup
and don't stop writing
-megz- |
Author Feedback: Wow. Thank you so much. |
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Aww, nice, I could feel Hermione's addiction to Harry lol... this one was longer, I liked that, and I especially liked the way the lyrics mixed with the plot, I loved this line "It's like I can't think without you interrupting me in my thoughts in my dreams" cuz it's exactly how I'm feeling at the moment lol  On to the third! |
Author Feedback: Thank you. Don't we all, at one time, have someone who completely takes over our thoughts. |
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Wow, another very powerful fic! I absolutely loved that, and I loved the way the wording was so poetic, the whole story was written very rhythmically. It was absolutely beautiful!
I can't wait to read more of your stories! You're a fabulous writer!
-Michelle |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much. The rhythm was quasi on purpose, so thanks for noticing. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/12/06
That was great. Wow...I hope that it isn't her last time. Well, this was lovely. I loved it. Great job. |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much. Now this one was fun to write, but hard. |
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Well done, the words were amazing and the detail was faboulous. |
Author Feedback: Thank you, I think this story is my favorite so far. Or, at least, the biggest stretch for me. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/05/06
Wonderful songfic... Helps that Addicted is one of my favorite songs, but really, your writing is very good. Hermione addicted to Harry is always  |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/05/06
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Author Feedback: Thanks |
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yesiUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/04/06
I can't believe you haven't gotten like 200 reviews on this!!!!!1  This is incredible and you should be extremly proud!!! |
Author Feedback: Thank so much, your words are so kind. I almost want to  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/04/06
Wow. In a strange sort of way, that was really beautiful. It felt a little dark to me, but powerful nonetheless. Are you going to do all seven deadly sins? |
Author Feedback: I only had Pride and Gluttony for the challenge, but I think I might end up doing all seven...maybe |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/04/06
Oh.......oh wow....I...I'm completely speechless. That was......wow. I mean, I'm sorry I'm not being very useful and pratically spamming but.....WOW. |
Author Feedback: It's okay, it's ego boosting spam, lol. Thank you. |
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AzusenaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/04/06
That was great i loved it wonderful job! ! ! ! ! ! !! ! ! ! ! !! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! |
Author Feedback: Thank you !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Lovely piece and such a fun take on this prompt. I'm glad that you got it posted over here. |
Author Feedback: Grazie mi amica.  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/04/06
god good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good |
Author Feedback: Why thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you. |
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