This is a good story. I am disappointed to see that it hasn\'T been updated. Please finish this great tale!

Please update! Please! The story is just too good to left like this! And I think there's not much left of it, right? He is going back into the future soon, so there can't be many chapters left! Well...sorry for being annoying, but well I just hope this isn't abandoned! Until next time!

Hi there...just checking here...I hope we get a new chapter from this story! Please!?! I mean we need it more now than ever! After DH! Well I really hope this story will be continued, it's too good not to be finished!!! Until next time!

Aw. that's so sad. poor Neville. is Harry going to find out about Ryan's secret too? hopefully you can update soon. i can't wait to find out what Ryan wrote. :]

Awesome fanfic! I usually don´t this kinds of fanfics, but this one had me hooked.


Please start writing on this one again!

I love it. please keep on. i really do wonder what will happen with neville. will he really die?

I just had to re-read it to be sure that it is still here.

I hope an update comes soon!

Surely, there is an update waiting to happen here?
I've been coming back often just to see how this one ends.

I am on the edge of my seat waiting...and will wait...and will wait... and hope...

Thanks!

Oh how I love this story! I know it's been a long time since you've updated, but I can't wait to see how this ends. It's one of those "everything happens for a reason" kind of stories, and those are honestly the best. Great job! Can't wait for more!

OH!!!!! please update soon!!!!! its right at such an importnat part too! damn weel i hope you update soon and if you don't i'll be um not patie-er patientlyy waiting for the next chapter 10/10

wow so life for harry seem's hella hard after hogwart's because of all the sadness thats overcome him, : ( anyways great chapter i can not wait to read the next one, though i tinhk ryan made a big mistake when he let some of the facts slip around the people form the past like harry and neville

wow life for ryan is not going to be easy in the past is it? nice chapter kinda weird how lupin new about it in the future i wonder y he didnt stop it or if harry and hermione knew?

i really loved the first chapter. it is definelty a completly differnt story then i have ever read. though the potter family household a lot like the Weasley's thougoh i always imagined them as more of a upper class family becuase of money or such though i dont think it matters in this story becuase of the awesome plot keep up the good work

Ryan wiped at his eyes as he let go of his mother and turned back to his father who was kneeling down to face him face-to-face. “Never, ever leave our sides like that again. Do you understand me?” he said in a gentle but stern voice.

“I-I only wanted to see the broom,” Ryan hiccupped.

“I understand that,” his father replied. “And I was going to take you inside to see it but you just needed to be patient. It wasn't going to just disappear like you did.”

Ryan frowned. “I'm sorry,” he said softly. “I didn't mean to get lost like that. I thought I'd never see you and mum again.”

His dad put a gentle hand on his head then let if fall to his shoulder where it rested. “No matter how lost you are,” his father said, looking right at him, “I would always find you.”


Absolutly love that passage, always makes me tear up. I really hope you aren't abandoning this story, it's to good to be left unfinished.

Really wanting to see more.

-Suzanne

Another fun one, though to some degree it's tough to make it fresh given that the tension of how to get back has been removed and the outcome is (presumably) known. Regardless, I'd like to see how you finish this off. Thaks for a fun read so far.