You know I had never read anything of this matter until now, but it really is quite lovely! Well, beautiful actually!! Great work!!  |
Author Feedback: Oh thank you! *smiles* |
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Ahhh, happy fluffy goodness!  Nicely done, with Hermione's dream, then the real Harry, and the revelation of the baby. And I liked the emphasis on being able to live without fear. |
Author Feedback: Thank you *Smiles* The dream I think is my favorite part of the whole thing. It was so much fun to write it. And I'm so glad everyone so far that's reviewed this liked the baby thing. I didn't know if it would work or not. Thanks again! |
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a very nice feel good story... I do hope that Harry would get the good life that he deserves... well... if the books won't give us that... there are fanfics like this that we can read and enjoy... toodles... there were some typos though and you used except when you should have used accept..thought i'd point that out |
Author Feedback: Thanks! I hope Harry has a happy life afterwards too. This was written in the hopes that he would. And of course hoping he would get that happiness with our favorite bookworm.  |
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Hermione's dream in the beginning was absolutely beautiful... I can't wait for summer to come...
I loved the 'surprise' in the middle! Aw, they're going to have a kid! Well written and very sweet, this was an awesome story. It encompasses happiness and love after the storm. Thanks for sharing! |
Author Feedback: Thank you! The dream was actually inspired by my girlfriend. She loves foxes and just running outside like that. So I sort of wrote it for her. Hehe I'm glad you liked the little surprise. I really wanted to do that and at first I wasn't sure how to do it. I almost put in after Harry asked how she was. But then I figured I'd just slip it in when you weren't expecting it. Thanks again! |
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all sweet and fluffy. yay. it was great.  i loved it. |
Author Feedback: Thank you muches |
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AzusenaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/04/06
That was really cute i liked it just a nice little fluffy story i haven't read one of those in a while great job! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! |
Author Feedback: Thanks Glad you liked it. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/04/06
This is abosolutely one of the greatest pieces of writing I have seen in short story versions. I have had the honor to read most of your writing and this is just as beautiful as the others!! |
Author Feedback: Thank you Jaci hehe *huggles you to pieces* I love ya muffin! |
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Awww...
My only problem was a small bit there where you switched to present tense from the past, but otherwise, it was lovely. |
Author Feedback: Thanks, I know and as much as I want to go fix it I am being very very lazy haha. I'm just proud of myself for having written it at all after everything that's gone on in the last month or so. Thanks again |
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fairyp80Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/04/06
Awww I like this fic. It's short and sweet. It is also perfect for this time of year. I just love going out side like that and enjoying the sun and breeze.... thanks for writing! |
Author Feedback: Thank you |
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That was great,i really love it and it was really sweet,i loved when Harry kissed her belly,that was soooooooo sweet 
You did a great job with this one shot and i really hope that you keep writing because your stories are really good and you are a great writer
Keep the amazing job and keep writing |
Author Feedback: Thanks! |
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PatriciaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/04/06
Lovely story ! God knows how much I want to see Harry and his Hermione having this full-of-love and peaceful future together !
Regards from Lima, Peru |
Author Feedback: Thanks! Yes I know exactly what you mean, we can only hope it will turn out this way. *pretends harry never went out with ginny* hehe |
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ah a beautiful look at what could be after the final battle of this was just so touching. |
Author Feedback: Thanks! And yes we can only hope it will turn out this way |
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lzodSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/04/06
Now that was a lovely little piece. Sweet & adorable all in one!
Lisa |
Author Feedback: Thank you! |
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EuroSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/04/06
Awww... It was really cute. I didn't see Hermione's pregnancy coming, which made the story even more cuter. Thank you. |
Author Feedback: Thanks so much I almost put it in after Harry asked her how she was feeling but then I changed it to what you see now. I'm glad you liked it. I was hoping the pregnancy thing at the end would work. |
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