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tiger111991
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 24/04/06
that was... don't you hate it when somthings soooo good and you can't find the word's to describ it? Well that's what's happening here. Great job!---Tiger111991
Author Feedback: haha, yes, I know exactly what you mean. Thanks.
 

alayneni
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 24/04/06
Great. Even though it was short. I think that was the best chapter!
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Mione_Potter7271
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 24/04/06
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww that was so sweet and the fact that he wants to give her his mum's engagement ring was very sweet and showed how much he loves her

I'm sad that this story is over but i really hope that i get to read more stories from you,you did a great job with this one and you are a very good writer,hope to read more of your ffcs
Author Feedback: thanksssss
 

Azusena
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 24/04/06
awww that was totally cute i really loved it great job! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/04/06
I don't mean trio wise either, first one then the other. In some of the others that I've read, it suprises me they can all still stay friends.

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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 23/04/06
I can't say I much like it if Hermione was Harry's first, but he wasn't hers. It always seemed alittle weird when writers have Hermione sleeping with both Harry and Ron-to tell the truth it creeps the hell out of me
Author Feedback: Well, she was engaged to him. :/

personally, I love Harry/Ron/Hermione fics.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 21/04/06
i remain having the same thoughts im sorry but your other stories are better
Author Feedback: Thanks for liking my other stories, then. XD this was just something I wrote on a whim in my biology class a couple months back, and it's gotten good feedback so far, but different strokes for different folks, i suppose.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/04/06
um im sure you really did your best but its not a very good beggining you could do much better
 

Julie3291
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 21/04/06
Nice quick chapter. I really like this short little ficlet. Can't wait for the final one.
 

alayneni
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 21/04/06
Wow what's next now. Ron will tell Ginny. Harry hasn't broken it off with Ginny yet! OH boy more drama to come!
 

Azusena
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 21/04/06
yay she left i really don't like ron and hermio ne together, i never have and i doubt i ever will great story can't wait to read more! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 21/04/06
I'm liking this very much, very enjoyable. One question, in the first chapter you had Hermione cry out when they...er, to put it delicately, joined, I kind of assumed it was their first time ever, because Hermione didn't reach her peak. So was it just Harry's first?

Keep up the great work and update soon!
Author Feedback: haha, I wasn't even thinking when I wrote that. Yes, I know, I'm a terrible writer for never planning things out before I write them.

But, I do like the idea of Hermione being Harry's first, so yes, let's go with that.
 

a muggle named Caity
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 21/04/06
I like the story so far. It's good.

Poor Ron though. I know Harry and Hermione want to be together, but they should have thought about that before they agreed to marry Ginny and Ron. It's just not right. No one deserves to be cheated on. You either be together, or not at all.

Anyway, good couple chapters. I look forward to the next update.

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Caity
Author Feedback: thank you.
 

October
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 21/04/06
This is good. I'm liking the style and the premise. Carry on!
 

Mione_Potter7271
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 21/04/06
WOW,that was interesting i wonder what Ron is going to do and what Harry is going to do too but i really hope that this has a happy ending and that Harry and Hermione stay together

I really like it and i think that you did a very good job,can't wait for the next chapter and keep the good work
 

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