That was a nice mixture of passion, lust, and a slight comedy. Loved it.

Ooh... fluffy and (a bit) smutty. My kind of story. I absolutely love it!

That was cute and sexy! Not to mention playful. I like it when Hermione lets go and becomes playful. It suits her well. Great job with this.

And I'm listening to the song as I read this. Cute. Love the little "I'm coming" line, and Hermione's admissable no question about the content.

WOW amazing, I totally loved it, you did an excelent job, congrats

Well at least someone had a backbone. Finally. This was a fun read.....thanks........

Finally I have time to read, and reply to things! I adore the way you write your one-shots. Like it's a moment in time between two things you've written.

Exactly what I've come to expect from you, a very well written story featuring our favorite couple. Somebody seems to have gotten on a string of sexual stories, I see. ;-) Not that I'm complaining.

lol I absolutely loved it! lol it was brilliant!
I loved the "i'm coming" bit lol
it was all very well written!
-Michelle

i really enjoy this story! i think you are a great author! you should think of writing a book.

I may have already reviewed, but I need to let you know that we were watching movies the other night at the store I work at and we popped this in. Well, needless to say, Cinderella will never be the same for me!

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Wow! That was.... Good.. lol it was most definatley intresting and was very good... wait scratch that it is an excellent story! lol

Wow! Are they every the yummiest couple to write about! I know they are to read about. Great job. That was definitely a great ficlet. Keep up the wonderful work!

OMG!! that was SUCH a GREAT story! i love how it ended, "whatever the lady wishes" "or dreams". that is SOOOOOOOOO romantic! u r a great writer. i hope to be looking forward to more from u in the future! i give u a ten, two thumbs up, and i would take my hat off 2 u if i had 1 on!