I serously couldn't care less if it took you half a year to get a new chapter finished, if the're this good!!! You make the people EXACTLY as i think of them!! and alice is a good peron to, lily couldn't get a better friend!! keep up the good work-even if it takes a while!!

Lycka till!!
Beatrice

I serously couldn't care less if it took you half a year to get a new chapter finished, if the're this good!!! You make the people EXACTLY as i think of them!! and alice is a good peron to, lily couldn't get a better friend!! keep up the good work-even if it takes a while!!

Lycka till!!
Beatrice

you still have me interested. i forgive you for taking 'forever and a day' to update . can't wait for the next installment!

That is really good! I love it, thank you so much for finally getting them together!

a bit emo at times, but every teen is angsty at some point in their adolescence. i like how u incorporate contemporary issues, like pressures in relationships and dealing with new feelings... can't wait for more!

it was kinda dark, but it got wayy happier this chapter. i like it quite a bit.

updato por favor (my spanglish)
xoxo tessa

good!!! really good!! but I think you could have made some parts longer... but that really does not matter, really good anyway!!

GIVE ME A BREAK!!! What's with the filthy language you have Lily using??? You should have said in the summary that this was way AU and only in your little mind would she talk like that!

lol oops, bad them! Pregnancy??
That was good; I enjoyed it. Well done.

x Cazzy x

Everything seems a bit OOC for all of them, but I don't really mind that so much because it's an interesting story and it's not expected. I would say slow it down a bit, don't take things so fast. Give it a bit of a build instead of jumping from a crush to suicidal depression to sex. Give it a little time to breathe so that we can savor the story. You've got a lot of potential, and despite it being a very strange and offbeat idea, which I usually can't stand (like one where Hermione becomes a hooker to pay for her illegitimate daughter), I'm enjoying it.

yes yes yes! love the start cant wait 2 read more! its lovely & funny & i think you got their characters just right (so far lol). i really like the way its written & the way lily writes in her journal - all the "steroetypical 17 yr old girl" stuff etc. great!!

oh yeah, why was the lazt chapter called EMO LILY...? are emo's supposed to slit their wrists cos I'm an emo and I've never though about anything like that....

OMG OMG OMG!!!! how can Lily slit her wrists???? that's so sad!!! Lily's too stubborn to do something like that man! And I don't think James would have acted like that either - I think he would have either gone with her or made up an excuse to get out of it --- not tell her straight!!!

I wonder what kind of protection people in the wizarding world use? Or do they use spells or potions to help? Wow, I never thought Lily would cause herself pain because James was pretending to not like her, though she didn't know that he was pretending. But this is your story so I guess you can write whatever you want. Your story is good though, but I don't really like the parts that are "emo." (And I do know what that means.) If you can help it, please don't put anymore of those kinds of scenes where characters are causing themselves physical pain. Thanks, that would be really great. Update again soon.

she's obviously unstable right now. lily should be in the hospital wing or a consillor's office. she's not in the right state to go to class right now, let alone sprint full speed into a physical relationship with a boy who made her miserible enough to cut herself. i hope harry never hears this story. consieved and raised in cupboards...