hey!!
i just finished all of your chapters
its good i really like it
keep up the good work^^
update soon

This is an interesting story, I like it, but i think you could put a lot more depth to each character as well as expand on what happens in the chapters. It seems a bit fast to me...but thats just me...anyway i hope you post soon and i look forward to reading the next chapter.

Nym

yeah. stop writing hun. quit while ur behind. do us all a favour

Ok seriously you need to finsih your stories. I mean Call Out you name isn't finsihed and you leave all your readers piss because they don' find out what happens next. Please updat soon. Keep Writing. Great story except that Lily is too vulenrable to her emotions i think.

So much better. I think james should never listen to Sirius ever again. I mean it's sickening. I wouldn't think Lily would take James so serious as cutting herself. But then again some people feel so disrespectful to themsleves, that are willing to hurt themsleves to show what pain they are going through. Keep Writng.

THIS WAS LAST UPDATED IN SEPTEMBER '06!!!!!!!!
I AM ITCHING TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS, AND YOUR NEW HOUSE/BOYFRIEND/KITTENS WOULD NOT TAKE SO LONG TO GET USED TO. HURRY UP AND WRITE ALREADY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hey im just posting to subscribe incase you bother to post another chapter.
That empty promise was not enough and its been two months already.
I wonder why its taken so long though?
have you abandoned this fic?
Well please update it soon or else the kitties get it
lol
Ok then bye.
this story is brilliant.

P.s. I guess I fall under the category of....what were your words?.....oh yeah..."those of you under eighteen, you little rascals shouldn't be reading this story!"

It is really good so far, great start! can't wait to keep reading!

Hehe very funny start... i hope the next will be good too

ITS SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !

so you wanna update again soon or what? these chapters are way too short!! update more!

But some people are mature enough to read some Rated R stuff and watch Rated R stuff like certain movies out in theatres or whatever. So you really can't blame them for wanting to read such an interesting story like this one. Nice job writing this chapter! Keep up the good work! And update again whenever you can.

This is an interesting twist on Lily's character and I think it is really good because it is so intense. I just had one off topic question: She shaves her arms? Is it just me or is that odd? Anyway, great story!

ooooo that was good, but short.

please update!! and say hi to your kitties and your bf for me!!

xoxo tessa

KITTENS!!! Awwie!
Uh, why shouldn't I be reading, hmm?? ^^^
This is good, and it's getting better!

x C x