Nicely done! It would have been nice to see if anyone else noticed Hermione's interesting apparel...

Very enjoyable and hot in any case.

--- "It's a wonderful thing to make a beautiful girl laugh"

I love that line. This was a very sweet and sensuous fic. A good "first time" story that doesn't turn the sex act itself into some kind of grand, earth-shaking (metaphorically) event. The chasteness they both show was very touching and real as is the nervousness they both feel.

I'm off to read ANOTHER of your fics!!!

Keep up the good work!!!

This story was beyond hot. Having it take place in the Prefects Bath is a really nice bonus.

smutilicious.

lol. thats my new word i made to describe your story. lol. good...love it.

muuuchh muuchh loovvee!

Good God... *flails* How, how, HOW did I miss THIS?!! It was so- so HOT and yet so sweet, so perfect, so-- beautiful (and did I mention HOT) and- and I love it-- and damn, I wish this were in HBP, making up for everything and I love you for writing that Harry started to fancy Ginny because she liked him and she was living the normal life he wanted (a brilliant insight, that!) and oh yeah, this was HOT.

Am so not coherent right now. I love your smut, I love your writing, I love the way you write H/Hr, I love you! *hugs* *worships*

I would certaintly like if you did rewrite the sixth book cause that was sooooo good...really cool!

I wouldn't mind if you decided to write the sixth book all over again. I'm sure that we, your faithful readers, would prefer your version. JKRowling is a wonderful writer, but the sixth book was really disappointing.
Good luck, and write more of this.
Sakura_txell

I really enjoy your writing. There is conflict and resolution that is a challenging, and yet you stay true to the characters in my opinion. Good job.

Matt

So, the missing chapter from HBP? What a wonderful find! Lovely job! I really enjoyed that - great read!
Cheers!
JanieB

that was nice. i liked it. it's so wonderful when two people find each other-even if it is in a bathroom.

Hehe I loved it! I wish that was in HBP! (If it was a smut-filled romance novel of course)... but seriously though... that should have happend! lol! I loved it! Very well written! A brilliant idea too!
-Michelle

What was it they called this kind of story? SWS of Smut with Substance?
It is a classic! Highly erotic setting, and a good plot and excellent ideas on HBP.

But, don't mind me saying, I think it is highly unrealistic. I can imagine few places less comfortable, especially for a first time experiance. ;-)

Wonderful story. I think I have read some on your stories on other sites and enjoyed them as well.

Phwoar.

Oh...oh my...that was...well, that was bloody brilliant. Wow. *fans self*

Good. Very, very good. Smut always equals good. Yay for smut.

I heart your one-shots very, very much. Keep them coming!

And I just realized that that phrase has two meaning. Ooer.

I love the prefects bathroom scenario... I've read a few stories like this, but I've got to say, this is probably my favorite! I found myself just saying awwwwww at the end there.