Ohh I am soooo happy Ben's not dead!!!!!!! I wonder where, or should I say when, they've gone now?
Sorry it's not the longest review, kind of busy, but it was great as always

~Thy Reader Most Faithful

At first I suspect Gnome but it seems it is Myddrin who caused all this. Anyway it's a great chapter. although all this time traveling and especially the log date a bit confusing. I have to reread the entire story to understand it and relate each event.

Keep updating!!! Just don't take too long please!

A little sad there at the end with Sirius saying he would die soon and Remus already dying when they got to their current location, but the entire chapter was very good. I will admit that a small amount was a little confusing, but I'm understanding this as we go; so with each new chapter more unfolds and is explained.
This really is getting into the mysterious realm with time traveling being present more so and this un-named being that must be captured.
I hope Hermione's loss of magic isn’t permanent and I agree with Harry your future is what you make of it, so with that I don't think Annie will be hurt or killed/die. I see her loved ones protecting her and Ben.
Kudos to you this was another brilliant chapter! Keep up the wonderful work! I always look forward to your updates so keep up the great job!

I in joy your story a lot! Please keep up the great work! Jimmy

Great chapter ... you appear to be making sense of some of the loose ends. Between postings I loose track of who belongs where or more importantly who doesn't belong in the current reality. Old timers disease ... I'm not called Barmy for nothing. Another one soon please.

Oh... good!!! so Ben is not dead. I really like Ben. It's too bad he has to wear the dark mark. I wish there's something to do to remove it. Great job!!! And Dudders come back!!! with family. Oh I love this chapter. Keep updating!!! and please don't take it too long.

Whew! Thank goodness!! I'm glad you didn't kill Ben and that was actually very cleaver of Annie. She is her mother's daughter. So I'm a little confused; I thought they were finally back in their own reality and were just having trouble figuring out who to trust, but towards the end it was starting to sound like they were in a very similar universe with only subtle differences. Oh, well. As you always do, I'm sure you'll have it explained in the next chapter or so. This was another excellent chapter and as I continue to read more the plot keeps twisting and getting more confused, but at the same time the earlier chapters are explained and so really everything makes sense you just have to get there. Exceptional kudos to you for another amazing chapter. I'm still very glad that you haven't killed off any loved characters. The part that explained Hedwig's death was a little sad, but it was done with more taste than book 7. Great work! I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm really understanding this story with every chapter that's added. and

P.S. Where are all your other reviewers? Don’t they know what a fantastic story they’re missing out on?!

NOOOOOOOO!!!! That was soo not cool! Poor Ben! And Ginny! Hope Arty\'s okay. Your stories just make me sad! lol but theyre good anyways. *grudgingly* it was a good chapter i suppose, minus the dying!!!

ugh now im bummed lol
its all your fault
~Thy Reader Most Faithful

No, no, no, no, no! Please, please, please don't let it be so! Please tell me Ben is *not* dead. This can't be happening.

On another note this chapter was really good. It drew in more pieces and it’s helping to make the puzzle clearer. Good work!
I'm glad everyone finally got back to their own realities. I hope that Annie and Jerry will say together. Their circumstance is kind of like the saying 'what doesn't kill you can only make you stronger' and I think that if they stay together this will make them stronger.
It's little sad that Ginny has passed. And as for my first part; I really don't know what to say at the end. Just please don't say that Ben is dead.
Otherwise, Kudos on another fantastic chapter! Keep up the awesome work. *Submits review and crawls under blanket to cry over the possible death of Ben*

Wow. There have been some times I don't understand how you keep these alternate univsrse characters straight. A mvery tough task, and you've handled it well. This is not a light read, but it certainly is a great one. Thanks for the updates so far. I'll be interested to see how you wrap this one up. Keep up the great writing. Thanks!

Gnome is disturbingly Yoda-like. Not sure that added much to the story, except to make the reader wonder if you had a specific reason for making that connection.

Excellent chapter! All the pieces are falling into place. Yippy!
The second section of this was a little confusing. Mainly because it jumped right in and I wasn't quite sure what point in the time line they were up to, but as I read on everything became much more clear. Major kudos to you. I love reading your updates. Yes, there is a little time in between the updates, but they are very much worth the wait. Please keep up the exceptionally awesome work. I truly love reading this story. Plus, the three predecessors to this are wonderful pieces of work. Great work! I can't wait for the next update. and

ahhhh that was a good chapter. There was a lot of stuff going on! I'm glad her and Jerry are okay, I can't wait to see what happens next
~Thy Reader Most Faithful

The story is good, but the part about "Spare the rod and spoil the child" in "A Riddle For a Potter" is absolute bullshit, and I truly wish you would remove that from your story.

There is absolutely NO reason to hit a child, none at all, the only thing it teaches them is that you are an ASSHOLE who thinks that by inflicting physical pain on someone, you can 'teach them something'. Load of bull, that is.

You do not teach someone something by beating them, you teach them by giving them reasons not to do the things in question that are not exaggerations, or attempts to keep them 'safe' that are nothing but your own neuroses coming out and being heaped upon them.

The absolute ONLY thing you teach a child by spanking them (and it is more of a beating than a 'spanking', a word that I would DELETE from the vocabulary books) is that if you are bigger or more 'in the right' than someone else, you have the right to cause them physical pain and anguish.

If Hermione TRULY didn't want the children in this story to wander off, she should have found someone who she could trust to go with them, fly with them, and keep them safe..... as if Ben was in any real danger until he got too inquisitive.

Children never learn who is dangerous and who is not unless they actually MEET people and learn that sometimes the people who others say are dangerous are not and that their parents are usually instructing them that the wrong persons are the dangerous persons.

love your story.
although im getting confused
keep up the good work.