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madipor
Signed | Chapter : 30 | Date : 28/10/07
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!! What can I say after reading those stories? I am in complete awe from the talent and suspense of this line. You have done a wonderful job in this. Not all of the 'time-line' type of fics have been able to keep up with the changing of the locations. you did outstanding with 'keeping it all in perspective'. I hope to see more from you. Keep up the great work.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 30 | Date : 24/10/07
Your series have consumed my last 2 weeks or so. At times I found it rather confusing switching to and fro various dimensions but on the whole rather comprehensible. I'm not sure if I approve of Yoda making a special appearance...but creator's license I suppose. All in all a very good series, thank you.
 

InnerBLONDE1892
Unsigned | Chapter : 30 | Date : 20/09/07
awwwww
oh I can't believe it's all over.....i've been following it for so long. I had to read the last few all at once-- I couldn't bother stopping to review each! Well firstly I have to say congratulations on finishing the series, you must have worked unbelievably hard to keep all your readers happy. Second I just want to say that these stories have been some of THE absolute best I ever read, and though I have had my sad moments throughout all the lost stories, this has got to be one of the best endings to a story I have ever read.

So congratulations, it has been a blast to follow these stories, and they have become a few of my personal favorites. I absolutely can't wait to read any works you write in the future!!!!
as always,
~Thy Reader Most Faithful
 

Percy
Signed | Chapter : 30 | Date : 20/09/07
An emotional end to a great story and saga. It was 'The Lost Witch' which first led me to this site via mugglenet and I haven't looked back. Thank you for that and thank you for writing and sharing a truely great story with us all
 

kajlima
Signed | Chapter : 30 | Date : 19/09/07
It's definitely a good story. I followed from the Lost wizard to this and not at once disappointed. All of them are very related and I love how the way The previous volume foreshadowing the next folume. It's like a one giant book split into four. maybe you can write an additional notes that tell us how you crated this stories. I'd like to know that.

Once again The Lost Series has been one of my fav fanfic. It's a witty and smart story. I suggest you to write a new story with the same quality if not more. thank you for writing such a wonderful story. I am waiting for your next installment.
 

h.jean
Unsigned | Chapter : 30 | Date : 18/09/07
a good story..draggy in some parts n confusing...but still,a good ending..n a good ship!
 

kajlima
Signed | Chapter : 30 | Date : 16/09/07
Great chapter!!!!!!! Keep going!!! I am so suprised of the fast update. Thank you!!!
 

Harrys girl
Signed | Chapter : 30 | Date : 15/09/07
Oh no! It's done?! This is over?! It was kinda sudden. I was expecting another chapter or two at the most.

terrible ing I have never *ever* wept over a fanfic before. I didn't even cry at the end of book 5,6, or 7. But this... My emotional heartstrings are a sodden mess. If there is a standing ovation for this series I think I would like to be one of the lead offs to the ovation. A very sad, but beautiful way to close.

I would love to read more from you and I hope that we will be able to in the future. You are truly a gifted storyteller and one that should not go to waste.
I would like to read another book to this series, but after this emotional setback I slightly fear what you would have in-store were there to be another book.
I don't think kudos would eloquently express to you how this chapter and this series of stories have affected me. Whatever possible word I could use if it exists should be placed here. This is one of the most prominent series that has helped me keep my belief in the Harry and Hermione relationship. I extend my gratitude to you as an reader, author and above all a fan of your work. Here's to hoping that we will again be able to read more from you soon.

Michelle ~*~*~ Harrys girl
 

Barmy_old_Codger
Signed | Chapter : 30 | Date : 14/09/07
WOW!!!! That was a powerful ending that would make re-reading the entire series worthwhile!
Barmy
And now it's time for something completely diferent ...
 

Barmy_old_Codger
Signed | Chapter : 29 | Date : 11/09/07
I thought you were going to start wrapping this up in a 'lived happily ever after' theme - apparently not - silly me to think you might be kind to them after all the grief you've caused. Keep up the good work.
Barmy
 

Harrys girl
Signed | Chapter : 29 | Date : 11/09/07
Woooaaaah! This whole chapter!
First, thanks in every way possible; especially for the fast update of this chapter.
I'm speechless. Thank goodness they got Hermione back and that Annie isn't going to die. I hope that they get Annie and Jerry back soon though. Sadness that Ron and now Lucy have die.
I hope Hermione will recover quickly and that her abilities remain intact when she is well again.
Over all though, this was a really good chapter. So Kudos to you for that. I'm sure there are others that read your story and just don't review so from those of us that still do, keep up the amazing work. You do this so well. You are most definitely an excellent storyteller. This has gone from a different version of Harry's fifth year to this hugely developed plot that has so much thought in it that I'm amazed you know where this is going. Fantastically well done! : W00t: w00t: w00t:
 

Egla
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/09/07
Just started on this story but my what a first chapter. Not time to slowly get to know everyone we get thrown in the center of the action right away. It's no problem though and the first chapter creates a promise for the rest of the story.

Will read it later this week and will have some more comments regarding this chapter (and probably the next few chapters as well).

Thanks for sharing this story with us.

Egla
Author Feedback: Lost Worlds is the 4th in a series, whiich explains why there's a bit of confusion. You may want to start with Lost Wizard, then Lost Witch and Lost Worlds.
 

Harrys girl
Signed | Chapter : 28 | Date : 08/09/07
Uh oh! I think this new guy might be that prisoner they're looking for, but who is he? It's mind numbing. I'm sure he's someone the trio and friends already know, but at the same time someone they don't suspect. It's just trying to figure out who it is!
I'm glad Annie and Jerry are starting to make amends to their relationship. Another thing I'm curious about is what is in that folder Harry and Hermione purloined from the future.
This chapter has a big 'yippy' attached to it because I understood absolutely everything that was going on. I'm certain that the other chapters that have be posted and the forth coming chapters will also make more sense soon enough; most already do. Kudos to you! You've done another wonderful job with this story. It was nice to have the happy moments in this chapter that are starting to become fewer as we progress through. I do hope that Hermione's abilities are restored to her soon. Keep up the amazing work; I can't wait for the next chapter! and
 

Barmy_old_Codger
Signed | Chapter : 28 | Date : 06/09/07
Nice chapter, but can't you leave the kids be for a while? Now you've gotta post anudder chapter to rescue them. Please post soon
Barmy
 

InnerBLONDE1892
Unsigned | Chapter : 27 | Date : 31/08/07
Ohhh I'm so sad for Lupin...I do hope Hermione and her powers are okay, but that seems some Major with a capital M foreshadowing there. I actually wonder who Harry would choose if it came down to force- Hermione or his kids- NOT that the story should ever come down to that decision. Very good chapter, the time travel bit was slightly confusing, but not too bad. Keep it up!

~Thy Reader Most Faithful
 

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