Please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please continue this story. I really miss it...

please please continue this fic!!
i love it and want to know what happens next!!

i started reading this fic earlier today-- and have since taken every excuse i could muster to come sit in front of my computer and read more. please dont keep us waiting too long?

i started reading this fic earlier today-- and have since taken every excuse i could muster to come sit in front of my computer and read more. please dont keep us waiting too long?

ahhh! this is too good! i love this story, you are one of the most talented authors on this site. You're definitely going to go far. It's been too long since you updated, please continue. I'm hooked!

It seems like forever since I first read chapter 6...I hope it's not forever before I read chapter 7! I love this story, please continue it!

I loved your Shakespeare analogies - and I thought Portia was quite accurate for Lily. Fantastic, she is. Not having read Hamlet, I can't say the same for Remus, but maybe I ought to go find that.

I'm adding this to my Author Alerts. You've set this up in a way that I can't not find out what happens!

I hope you'll continue to update!

This is an intriguing spin-off from canon. Your writing is well-paced and you've built up your characters and setting well. I'm just pausing a moment to let you know before I carry on to read the next chapter. Great beginning; I'm very interested!

Please I'm dying to know whats going to happens so please post the next chapter Im like going on the web site every day.

Please send in chapter 7 I'm dying here I love it

wow! amazin story! really gr8 work! love it! personally love the language !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! just keep writin k?!

noooooooooooo what the heckk you cliff-hanger-person! update soon, pretty please, before i die of... well, boredom or something.

ooh james potter. the one, the only, super-hott [in my mind, anyway], intelligent, amazingly AMAZING boy who doesnt exist. unfortunantly. we're all waiting for our own james.

He better do something he considers foolish, for I as sure as hell don't think he is.

I see you haven't updated in a while, but if you get a chance please do, I would enjoy another chapter.


Its a great work, I love Lily's character, its suits her

This is a really good story! I wish you would update soon!