brittiSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/05/07
your stories are great i only read these but i am sure i will read them all...keep up the good work and good luck to your future writings!...your stories are truly great! |
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alayneniSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 13/12/06
Great ending. It was nice. You actually portrayed Ron as being mature. I like the Luna comment. That was great. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 04/09/06
I liked the second chapter. I am glad that you put that understanding. Hopefully Ron will find Luna and everything will be happy like it's usppose to be. Lol. Nice job. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/09/06
Oh wow. That was realy really great. I loved it. Great job. I am glad to know that Ron wasn't that hurt. I am quite sure that Ron won't forgive them for a long time, but what can you do. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/08/06
nice ..chapter but wished they shudnt have told ron this on the wedding day..come on...he is human..!!! |
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lzodSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 05/08/06
Another brilliant little fic. I would like to know what Ginny & Molly said to her & also if Voldie was dead or not. I still can't get over the fact that alot of people seem think that Ron & Hermione are meant to be together & Ginny & Harry are meant to be together....I never could picture that.
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While I did enjoy the story, it does seem un-Hermione to have an affair; no matter who with or why. Other than that, it was a great story.
Keep it up, Ash. |
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SayvorieSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/08/06
Oooh. This is one of the best I've read in a while. I love how you wrote Harry and Hermione, they sounded like they did in the book, and yet, you managed to add your own person twist to it. It was brilliant, can't wait to read more from you. =D |
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saralinaSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 04/08/06
I really like this story, espeacially the part where Hermione explains to Ron how all they did is fight and how they just weren't right for each other, I think that that's exactly what's happening in the books right now and that Hr/R would never work out even if JK ends up putting them together. Anyways, when's the next chapter coming? Better be soo! |
Author Feedback: Thank you for the review, and I'm glad you liked the story. I'm sorry to say, however, that I have no current plans to add anymore to it. I wrote the first and was then inspired to add a bit more for clarification, but I've got nothing left to add, really. Sorry there isn't more, and thanks again. |
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Ah, very nicely done, showing the talk between Ron and Hermione. More weariness and resignation, really...and the comment about Luna was great.  And of course the end was wonderful, the start of a new life, openly together. |
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Ah, angsty but resolving to the way things really ought to be. Loved the trust between them, with Hermione trusting Harry to handle packing her stuff...especially her books. For a book-a-holic, that's real trust. |
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Tank03Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 04/08/06
Wow, Ron took that a lot better than I expected. I suppose he can't argue with what is obvious, even if he was unwilling to admit it. It's a shame that Harry and Hermione had to hurt a loved one, but in the end it's better than if they tried to deny what they had.
Another fantastic story- thanks for sharing! |
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fledgeSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 04/08/06
Well, I never expected there would be something like - well, what is it? - follow-up. Again, I'm not so sure Hermione is altogether Hermione-like here, but thanks for the beautiful fluffy ending. |
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huh. ok, well, i guess i was wrong. about the whole "ron being mad as heck" dealie... ok, pretty sure he's mad, but he didn't quite take it as bad as i'd thought he would (leave it to hermione to bring luna into the conversation, lol!). this chapter was a bit on the confusing side to figure out what timeframe it had to deal with and such... but i think it was worth it, because this was a good fic (not to mention, hermione actually got to leave with her life  thank you for that, by the way  )
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This was actually sweet in a odd sort of way. I thought Ron would have blown up more, but considering this is supposedly Hermione's memory of what happened it's probably toned down a bit. Well another Kudos to you for another great ficlette! Hope to read other's like this soon. |
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