cashewmagSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/04/06
Loved this part
“Hermione…”
“Hmm?” she hummed against his lips.
“You realize we’re snogging in a closet like a couple of teenagers?”
She laughed. “Well, we never had time for that sort of thing when we were teenagers, so I say it’s high time.”
She scooted into his lap and drowsily nuzzled his neck like a happy kitten. Her arms twined around him and her nuzzling turned to warm, damp kisses.
 Awww...so sweet! Good use of creativity there! Hope to read more of these sweet little moments |
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Wooo, love this one-shot! Thanks for sharing this fun, cutey ficlet! Nothing like a lil champagne and a closet (wish it was a broom closet!) to get two people who already each other together! >_< THanks for sharing! |
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I effing LOVED this part:
She patted his arm in her very Hermione way. “Someday you’ll find a woman worth your attention.”
“So will you,” he replied. “I mean, a man. I’m assuming you’d want a man.”
Brilliant one-shot! Very cute, indeed.  Great job. Keep up the greatness!
~Glitterfairyxoxo |
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usha88Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/04/06
That was great. I loved it. And Ron was fine with it. I love those fics where Ron is nice about it. That was cute that they made-out in a closet when they were hiding from everybody. Very cute.Lol |
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Julie3291Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/04/06
Very cute little one shot. I just love ron's reaction. |
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LinseyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/04/06
I love your stories.
I really do.
I've read pretty much all of them. Theyre all so..perfect. There is no flaws, it just flows--its great. |
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Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.
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That was cute..
"I’ll never understand why mature, intelligent men want the stupid bints I always seem to get passed up for." That line reminded me of an episode of the nanny where they are talking about how they need someone they can relate to and its right under their noses.
It was just a cute little one shot not to "riskay" but all the same.
I hope that it won't be just a one night stand (ONS) Because than I would be angry!
good job it has made my easter! |
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RobertkUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/04/06
The story was light, and humorous! I enjoyed it very much
Robertk
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/04/06
I don't like to think of what we do aboard the HMS Pumpkin Pie as "abuse". I prefer to think of it as "looking out for our boy". Just like you did here in this story. I really enjoyed it. |
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hagridSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/04/06
I fer one don't want ter think about where that fork might'va been, got ter be the nastiest weapon Harry's aver had used against Him. A lovely little story none the less. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/04/06
Very cute! Wishful thinking on many of our minds, but hope never dies. They belong together, those two! |
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Very cute fic!! I just totally cracked up at the part where Ron threatens Harry with the "eating utensil".
And when Harry says "Hopelessly", I just melted. Awww...
Nice. |
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Lol, that was bloody brilliant, it was very sweet how they finally take the step and get together
I loved how you put Ron, already ready to kill him if he breaks her heart and it was the best when Harry said that he was in love with her
You did a great job with this and keep writing because you really are a great writer and i'm looking foward to read more of your stories,nice work |
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Quite cute, if not a tad late. Ah, well. What better time to read a Valentine fic than on Easter?
I'm glad we didn't see any Evil!Ginny or Jealous!Ron's. (Although I do like stories where Ginny is put in her place...)
Great job. Until next time! |
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