I love the story. A great AU. I'm about to start raeding the squeal.

While I have enjoyed reading Guardian, I have a few things to remark upon. I really have no problems with a good strong heroine as in this case, but it saddens me that to have one here you have emasculated Harry. Also, why go to the trouble of having not one but two different necklaces that would allow Hermione to find Harry then have them become completely useless? After the "rescue" of Harry and finding that her love for him is what allowed her the power to do so, I find it completely OOC to allow herself to be separated again even for more training. Finally, I find it very lazy upon your part to just have Harry disappear from their bed at Hogwarts. One, it is completely OOC for death eaters to have left her there when supposedly they would have such ready access to both. Two, it's just way to bonkers to have this invisible method of getting into Hogwarts to capture what is supposed to be one of the most powerful wizards in the neighborhood.

That's really good. The characters are adjusting well in this fanfic.

Whew! What a rush! It's been a long ride of ups and downs. I'm so glad you've done this one.
There are still a few typos, but none to bad. Your beta has probably caught most of them. Such things as "then" instead of "than", "though instead of "thought" in a few places. All in all, a well written piece. A few non Brit words also popped up, nothing too serious though.

Ahh! Finally some serious stuff is about to happen. I've been waiting patiently, so next chapter should be good. Can't imagine why you've written Luna's prediction of unhappiness for H/Hr as if it's a final outcome. I'm hoping not!

This is really good writing. I'm surprised that I haven't run across this one before. Firenze seems to be a bit OOC, but that's OK, as he seems to be essential to the story. The further I get into this story, the more I like it.

Hey, this is a really good idea! I never thought of this opening for a story. It's a little late for her to be showing magic though. I would have thought a smart girl like her would have exhibited magic much sooner. Got to see where you take this.

Having Ron teach Hermione 'Wingardium Leviosa' was such an amazing touch! I'm really enjoying the story so far and can't wait to get in even further!