*shivers* Good lord, this was so creepy. So so so creepy. Voldemort/Hr creeps me out like nothing else can. *twitches*
Very like Hermione to resist screaming to deny Voldemort that satisfaction. The last line was sheer brilliance.

...wow... I love it, it's amazing, and I love how you killed him and I love how you used Hermione and Harry like that.. it's amaing and I'm not 100% aware of the harmoney seven challenge what is it? and if it involves you writing 7 stories like this one... then I say HURRAY!!! ha ha
keep itup
-megz-

Well, what can I say? I was intrigued to read the seven sins (I already forgot the name, I have a terrible memory) so here I am! A little bit short but quite good, though Voldemort should have said something else to Hermione besides "my little mudblood" Oh well, still it's pretty good, so now I'm going to head over to the second

Wow, that was really powerful and emotional, and I love the way you ended it. The poem fit into it all fantastically as well. Wow, I really loved that, absolutely brilliant!

-Michelle

Well, that was quite dark. I am off to read more of the few things. I thought that this was quite interesting. I am confused as to whether or not what happened to Harry though. Off to read more of series.

loved it! it was really well written. good work. i'm glad i found it.

That was an amazing story. I just love the poem. I love to write them myself and that was just a brilliant one. I've never heard that saying before (how sad of me) but damn it's true. WoW! I simply loved this.
Very well written!
Take care and keep it up!!!
Sheryl

That was awesome i wish you would have shown a little bit of what happened after o well it was great anyway! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Wow amazing. Wonder if we can get something like this in book 7

Awwww!!! 'Mazing!! The poem, the story line, everything!!

It's perfect! Really loved it! Just the reference to Ginny...agrh! I can't bear her flaming red hair and all the perfectness JKR says she has... Well...back to track.

Loved it really! Keep up

Cheerios,
Joanne

Very nicely done. This would be an excellent way for the books to end, but I know it isn't going to happen. If nothing else, JK's not gonna mention anything about people having sex, even if they are teenagers fighting a war...

*shrugs* Sad, but she does claim to write children's books.

Hmmm that poem is an interesting bit of inspiration, which you've successfully brought to life in your fic! Simple and yet engaging, just the way I like it! Keep up the good work! ~Ronnie

I littel dark, but good. Not much more I can say. It was really great!---Tiger111991

That was awesome. Very...dark, but I liked it. Great job. Poor Hermione, having Voldermort invade her thoughts and replacing Harry with him. I don't think I could take it. She's super strong. Nice title.

Hey I liked it a lot, I wish you would write another chapter to this one, like an epiloge, its really good, take care