AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 10/09/06
My mom was a muggle
AAACKKK!!!! Hemione is MOST CERTAINLY NOT a muggle. She is a muggle-born!!!! But a witch no less. grrrr |
Author Feedback: Yeah, I know. Get over it people. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/09/06
heh heh .... and make charity just likehermione and there you have lily and james the 3rd and then theyhave a kid and the kid will look just like matt and meet a girl who looks just like chariy who looks like hermione who looks like lily and you have james and lily the 4th who will then have a kid who looks juat like harry, like matt and he will meet someone who is like hermione who is like lily who charity loks like and they marry and become lily and james the 5th and then the have a kid who bla blablabalbalbalbalab |
Author Feedback: uh....all righty! |
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Ahh!!! I love this story and am sooo happy that you updated!!! Please Update Soon AGAIN!!! DO IT QUICKLY!!! hehe!!! |
Author Feedback: lol I'm working on the next chapter right now! |
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history seems to repeat itself doesn't it? I really like the next gen trio aspect of this story. Though I am curious on weither or not Matt's going to tell his friends his history, be interesting to see their reaction to how close it was to them not having their best friend. this is really good stuff and for original characters they have really sprang to life and are enjoyable to read. That's testiment on how good of an author you are, so keep up the great work! |
Author Feedback: He's not telling them his history for a reason, but they will have to discover it eventually. I love these characters, so they seem a little bit more realistic to me than others I've written...thanks for reviewing!
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MioneUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 22/08/06
I miss this story so much. Can you PLEASE update??? Its been ages!!! |
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Yay!!! I was soo happy you updated because you are one of my favorite author's on this site and I love this story!!! Please keep on updating and do it quickly!!! GREAT JOB AND KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!! UPDATE SOON!!! |
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stu14688Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 02/08/06
This is so cute! I wouldn't have thought of using a restraining order to make a friendship come about! But, hey, whatever works...That Charity is one smart girl.
Now, Julie is an interesting character - kinda like Luna, only a bit more cryptic. I'm still trying to figure her out, but I'm getting there! I did like her Shakespeare quote, though - very appropiate.
Well, I'm waiting for the next chapter now. Put it up as soon as it's done, but take your time. Keep up the good work and God bless! |
Author Feedback: I know, I know...kinda weird, but it happened in real life, so why not happen here? Julie is based off a real life Luna, and, well, still unsure of her part in all this...
Hopefully I'll update soon! Thanks and God Bless! |
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stu14688Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 02/08/06
I like this chapter! The rivalry between Dwight and Matt is something else. They'll probably turn out best of friends, though. I don't figure anyone will be able to hurt the other one in any way without revenge being sought.
I'm sorry this isn't a long review, but it is a good story! I'm headed to the next chapter!
Keep up the good work and God bless! |
Author Feedback: Thanks! Haven't heard from you in a while! Hm, how did you know what would happen with Dwight and Matt?!? lol |
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Author Feedback: Why shouldn't he be alive? Gotta have one mean teacher!
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I like this chapter. I like how now Matt and Dwight are friends. I like how Matt said "with a smirk, he realized that this wasn't the first friendship that had formed on a stormy, Halloween night." The is an awesome line. |
Author Feedback: Thank you! Of course they had to become friends on Halloween lol |
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I love that girl! Thanks for updating! I can't wait for the next chapter!---Tiger111991 |
Author Feedback: Thanks! Hopefully the update will be sooner than they have been lately! |
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Great absolutly amazing chapter!  I like what you did James Potter and Sirius Black enemies and then became the best of friends. And how Matt and Dwight talked at the end and becoming friends too.  Can't wait till the next chapter! |
Author Feedback: Thank you! I have NO idea what's next, but hopefully it won't be too long in the making! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 29/07/06
Why is Dwight even more annoying than Ron?
Please make Matt and Charity be together!!! |
Author Feedback: Next chapter, we'll see how Dwight really is important. And you'll just have to keep reading...
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 29/07/06
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Author Feedback: Wow, sorry! I didn't notice until you told me that I'M NOT PERFECT. So I guess this means the whole story is stupid since it all is really impossible! I mean, word slips are so awful, I should be hung up in a burlap sack and be beaten with reeds because this is certainly unforgivable... |
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Hooray for this chapter!  Matt and Charity seem a litte like Harry and Harmione  I wouldn't be surpirsed if they ended up together. Jacob sounds little like Draco doesn't he. Well I can't wait till the next chapter! As always I rate the stories I read so...  I give it four thumbs up!Keep up the good work! |
Author Feedback: Thanks! We'll just have to see what happens with Matt and Charity. As for Jacob... yeah, he's sheer evil.  Hopefully the next chapter will be up quicker than this one!
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