hermione5Signed | Chapter : 7 | Date : 21/11/07
i find it interesting how you've written the start of this story...it seems like the are the trio who find out about love a lot soon...just my opinion though... cannot wait for the next chapter  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 01/04/07
i have read read all the chapters posted thus far in this story but just last night i read the hardest thing and it makes me wonder if julie is like sisters to that one girl who loved matt but died after jerod her name was mary ann maybe? |
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Author Feedback: truthfully, um, she DOESN'T like Matt. He's just her best friend ever and she's a clueless girl.  |
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lzodSigned | Chapter : 7 | Date : 17/09/06
Oh wow. Yeah, young girls can be witches with capital B's. *G* Don't ask me why, it must be a hormone thing. *G* I can't wait to see the next chapter of this.
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Author Feedback: Yes, I completely agree! |
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I really like this chapter. That poem is so good! I like Matt is there for Charity. I hope you update soon! |
Author Feedback: Thank you! I'm working on the next chapter now! |
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good stuff as always! the poem was a nice touch there at the end and looking forward to seeing where this goes. keep up the great work! |
Author Feedback: Thank you! |
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VandrozaSigned | Chapter : 7 | Date : 14/09/06
You have an incredible talent for telling stories. The Hardest Thing had me crying through so much of it I had to stop reading every few paragraphs to be able to finish the story. I'm glad you're continuing on with this part of his life too because I really wanted to know how the next part of the story played out. It's made even more touching by the fact that you're basing it off someone you know, and I hope things always go well for him. |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much! He is a very special person; this story has overtaken me, and the best I can do is share it with others! |
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VandrozaSigned | Chapter : 7 | Date : 14/09/06
You have an incredible talent for telling stories. The Hardest Thing had me crying through so much of it I had to stop reading every few paragraphs to be able to finish the story. I'm glad you're continuing on with this part of his life too because I really wanted to know how the next part of the story played out. It's made even more touching by the fact that you're basing it off someone you know, and I hope things always go well for him. |
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stu14688Signed | Chapter : 7 | Date : 14/09/06
Hello! I did actually review the last chapter, but my computer is stupid and it didn't go through. Now, I can't remember what I said, so I'll try to make this one a good one.
First off, I love that poem! Did you write it yourself? It's beautiful! Not to mention, it's perfect for the chapter.
I feel so bad for Charity, having been lied to like that. It's just wrong, but the thing is, she's only 11 and she has lots of life left to live and plenty of love left to find. Most of us don't meet the love of our life at 11, so though it hurts, don't give up yet.
Okay, I'm convinced that Matt hasn't told anyone of his illness from his younger days, but has someone found out about it? I know it says that a couple of people were "acted like [he] was a dying person." If that's not a hint, then I don't know what is...but then again, I've been known to be wrong before - a lot, actually.
Anyway, I think this is a very good chapter (and so was the last chapter, too), and I'm very excited that you updated so soon. Keep up the good work and God bless! |
Author Feedback: I was wondering why I hadn't heard from you! lol Nice to read your thoughts on this again!
Yes, the poem is mine, the first one I ever wrote, actually. Since this is the story of mine and the real Matt's story ie Charity and Matt (to some extent), there is going to be a lot more poetry, and it's all my own creation.
I struggled with whether or not to put in the Charity-broken-heart thing right now, since she IS only 11...but after I finish writing about first year, I'm going to be skipping quite a bit, prob. all the way to fifth year. This part of the story is a very crucial point, and though it may be a little bit unrealistic according to time, it is definitely necessary.
You are right, Matt hasn't told anybody of his past. The reason that Mark and Jorge "acted like [he] was a dying person" is because they knew how he felt about Charity, and they knew that she was in love with Dwight. They felt pity for his blind love and were just being idiot boys. But more on that later...
Thanks for reviewing again! Update will be soon!
Katie
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prongs_69Signed | Chapter : 6 | Date : 12/09/06
this fic is absolutely awesome!!!! it's predescescor was good but oh my...this is fantatsic |
Author Feedback: thank you very much!
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DaniUnsigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 11/09/06
Its been awhile since you updated this story! Thanks for updating. i really enjoy reading it. I also have a question... Do Charity and Dwight know about Matt having Leukemia as a kid? |
Author Feedback: No, they do not know anything about Matt's past. |
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lzodSigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 10/09/06
I just caught up on this story. *G* Totally love how this is all going & still can't believe that Snape is still his hatefull self. Can't believe that no one has had a chat with him about how he shouldn't let his hatered for James carry on all these years, but then again, Snape is a self absorbed prat who thinks he is above everyone else.
Lisa |
Author Feedback: lol Guess some things never change... |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 10/09/06
jeez you should have made charity love matt
jk jk its your story who am i to to say what you should and should not do.
i think it is a great story do far. |
Author Feedback: thanks! And more will ensue as time goes by |
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Author Feedback: it's all happening for a reason. Honestly, Matt and Charity are really too young to form a lasting relationship. Everything will work out in due timing. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 10/09/06
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Author Feedback: uh, yeah! |
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