Had i been 15 years younger and lived by you i would have asked you out on a date LONG time ago , we share the same humor and look on life i think , well....yours is certainly more vocabulary than mine hehe, but still .

Now about this story, where is the next chapter!??!?, please continue, it BEGS to be continued in some way (only your mind has the key to how but still....), they way you write Hermione and introduce the readers to how the different people react to her being catatonic is simply poetry in my view.

The Ron in your story is precicely how he would have reacted if it had happened in Cannon (now i better watch out because i have not read the two last books and don't really plan to, so this MIGHT have happened for all i care.)

Okay....IF you don't feel the need to make another chapter then i guess i should tell you that the ending was great and yes it fitted the story. But some part of me still wish that you could catch that muse again and enlighten us readers with more humor and of course lets not forget, romance.

You did a great job keeping me awake since it's now 3 in the morning here in Denmark.

Thank god i have tomorrow off from work!.

Great job!.

Love, love, love. And more than that. A lot of stories don't think of Hermione being mentally active when she's in a come, and I've seen many. Just one thing...please tell me she's able to see and walk and talk and things on her own within two or three years. You don't even have to write a sequel. Pleeeeease. *puppy dog eyes* Either way, awesome job. Keep up the good work!

Well, even if you're silly by nature you still write great. I recently found this site (portkey) and now spend hours every day reading. Keep on writing!

that was just so lovely. Harry... Oh, Harry. I love him. he was so nice throughout the story. nice one!

Nnnnnnoooooooooooo!!

*yells, rants, screams, wails*

You cannot leave us there! Aaaaasdfghjkkl;;';;llkkjhhgffddssa! ...Aww, make-do curses are no fun. *sulks*

I loved it! I cried and laughed whenever I was prompted, and, lemmetellya, that's something! I hardly ever openly laugh or openly cry when I read/watch something emotional. Fo' srs.

The characterization is practically perfect! And compliments (at least, genuine ones )are pretty difficult to get out of me, too. (Ask a few personal friends and you'll know) Fortunately, you seem to have gotten a few from me, so you know you're good.

I can't find any nits to pick, and I just have to say, once again, that I absolutely adore your writing style, your ideas, your concepts -

But that won't stop me from demanding a sequel to this. D<

Purdy please?

that is so sad...hermione has been locked up in there for a bloody month?!.....i even barely took well the fact that she is in there and her freinds and family was so grieving for her..... ginny , ron, all of them were in deep despair that's why their actions seemed to be pathetic but so touching....... tears fell from my eyes at this one....wow, ur good....

although i'm not sure that i would call this angst, this is definitely more serious thatn your other writing, and i really enjoyed it. it was a really original idea, i dont think i've ever read something like this before. anyway, great job.

Another fine one. *G* I loved how Ron "punted" a house elf to see if that would wake her up. So like him.

Lisa

what there is to criticise....good work. I like it very much.

well done! it's so good, and so creative too! hope you write more soon!

Oh that was such a cute story. If you ever find out what book this story is based on, could you post it on this story? It would be grately appriciated. It was an amazing story. And I think you should continue with it, but that is entirely up to you.

Liked it... I think I know the book... know the title in german... moment... there is the book ;-) "Look up for yes" should be the english name... true story, from Tavalaro... an amazing story... you read it with 12?
Anyway... back to YOUR story... that was amazing too
Thank you very much for writing it
Lie

Very well written. Would have liked to read a bit more about how Hermione's body started fully functioning.

nice story. I love Ron's ways of waking her up. It's sweet of him to do.

I absolutely loved it!!!
That was so sweet
My god....from now on you are in my list of favourite authors.