hermy415Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/12/06
awww,,, she had said all she needed to.... that so sweet..i like the way you put it in a way where she's there when he needed her and she's the one who said i love you but even though harry didn't say i love you too still, he proved he does because he kissed her...... awwwwww.....is this your first time to write a h/hr fanfiction? i can see u've written loads of d/g fics.... |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/04/06
GREAT story...best short fic I've read in a long time. Keep it up!! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/04/06
really cool and moving....nice dialogue...i was really into the story so i was sad when i reached the end |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/04/06
Aw... I loved this! It's so cute. I hope you do more H/Hr because your really good at it. I noticed all you have written so far is D/G, which is good too. Write some more in any ship for all I care, you a good writter. |
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AzusenaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/04/06
That was great awsome job! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !! |
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aww this was so sweet!  I liked it a lot, very good job! My, I see this is the first H/Hr you write, hehe... you did an excellent job and it was very smooth, things didn't feel rushed, it just fell into place...  thanks for writing this |
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usha88Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/04/06
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aracneSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/04/06
Its beautiful, I really really liked it,you did a great job, thanks for a nice read |
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sarahmaySigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/04/06
 Awe...that was perfect. I absolutly love this story and it's just so true. You've done a SPLENDID job
Keep it up! If everything else you write is this good I just might start stalking your stories...  (damn...they're all D/G...and I'm big time H/Hr...maybe I'll try a few out tho  )
Sarah |
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alayneniSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/04/06
This was great. This should definitly have a sequel. There is so much you could right! |
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wow - this is your first hhr fic?! i love it! not too much fluff but enough fluff to let us imagine their joy in finding each other in a more important way. more secure with each other than without. AWESOME! i thought by reading this i would cry but i didn't! no need for tears. Hope is what they need. they can find that in each other. GREAT!
good job!
melissa
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PatriciaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/04/06
Great story  !!! Totally loved it  !!!That final paragraph and line were amazing  !!
Hope to read more Harry&Hermione stories written by you soon!
Regards from Lima, Peru |
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That was amazing! My favorite part is: she wondered why no one had ever seen it. Then she realized it didn’t matter. They had found each other before it was too late.
Well done luv! |
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Very sweet, yet sad. Poor Harry. Thank goodness for Hermione. She always knows how to get through to him. Good job! |
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aww, this is adorable. I love it. so, so cute. lots of fluff.. I love it. lol. it melts my heart.... |
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