nice. short. sweet. good. 'Hermione cried again. If only. If only she would have known the truth then. If only she could have told him she was carrying his child. He would have stayed. He would have never gone away. If only. Everything would have been different. She wouldn't be alone and crying her eyes out. She would be with him and he would be with her. But he had to go and she couldn't stop him.' it's so... emotional, but in a good way. keep writing!

Interesting plot development. Like the way u wrote the plot. Keep it up. will wait for ur futher development of the story.

Well that was good. It left the reader to wonder what was going to happen. Great job. I do hope that they get reunited and something good happens in teh end. Great job.

Is this a oneshot? If it is, you should do a sequel, so we can see when Harry returns. All in all, it was pretty cool. Please do a sequel!!!

*~Archie~*

Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.

Man... I've tears in my eyes... This is so look alike to a story I wrote last year... though I abandoned it and started a adventure/action one instead.

My... It's wonderful... You made me smile for the 3rd time this week(my weekend was dreadful)

Keep up!

Cheerios,
Joanne

Thanks for the grat h/hr fic, the song I love, within temptation is a great band.