AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 17/04/08
A really cute story. A Big challenge, but you did a great job. |
| |
AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/11/07
|
| |
AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/08/07
Er, the rating ought to be upped to be on the safe side. It is rather risque. ^_^ an interesting idea of being married with no one knowing though. Though they are altogether far too young and I would surmise Mr. Granger being far from accepting. ^_^ |
| |
hermy415Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/12/06
aaww,,, nice story..a little rated but im already 15 and i can take that...ur good and the way harry comforts hermione because of the mails they received..that is so sweet......like it so much..good job!!!!!!!!! |
| |
|
i think the funniest part of this section was Sirius following him around, Hermione's reaction and Snape awarding points to Griffindor! I can't believe you found a way to make that happen. i'm very impressed.
I also love Harry's surprise. I would have liked to see what else you could come up with for his inheritance.
I like that you based it off of the 4th book, but added some characters and things that happened in the other books. It flowed well, I thought.
great job! |
| |
|
what a cool idea! i love it! i especially love the fact that they are already together and i don't have to sit here and wonder how they will get there - i can just relax and enjoy the fluffiness. :-)
Haven't they talked to Ron about it yet? it seems like they should have tried to explain it to him or something. or are they just letting him figure it out for himself?
the reactions were classic. very in character. i loved Arthur Weasley's by the way. the only thing better would have been Snape walking in too - so that he could have that image burned into his brain for years to come... :-) |
| |
pstibbonsSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/10/06
The primary problem - a most serious one at that - with this oneshot is that, if printed, it will not be as long as harry. |
| |
|
Also, before I forgot. I just wanna say it would be super awesome if your write the fanfic on how they fell in love before or the events in which they tried to hide their marriage.
I know ths is challenge but it would just be so fun to read. ^^ lol
Once again, awesome job. |
Author Feedback: Gah. Evil person. Now you got me thinking about writing that 
Sorry though, it'll probably never happen. With upcoming studies, being addicted to a MMORPG and general lazyness, I don't think I'll get around to it. |
| |
I absolutely love this! It's so damn adorable. and the humorous banter are just so funny and cute.
And at the end of the first chapter I love how Harry replied "Kinky isn't it?" It made me laugh out loud. XD
You did a great job!!  |
Author Feedback:  Glad you like it. I aimed to make a humours fic - and I particularly liked that part myself. |
| |
|
I loved this story! You wrote it perfectly. Keep up the good work and write more like it. |
| |
|
HI, Great story! I really like it, it's funny and a good read. |
| |
hpworldSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 29/04/06
enjoyed?.... more like loved it it was great.
reactions on McGonagall, Ron and others was priceless. It was a humorous, very nicely written one.
great work. |
| |
oh my god! this is hillarious. i cant stop giggle as i read the entire passage. good job! |
| |
|
it was ok. but its there 7th year right well um frist of all snape run for it oncce he KILLED dumbledor and ameila bones is dead to and you said that they were 19 o and i think ron and hermione should be together and then harry and ginny but beside that stuff i liked it |
Author Feedback: I don't know if you will read this, since you're unsigned and without any e-mail address, but don't you think you're in the wrong place if you're a Ron/Hermione shipper? Considering this is a Harry/Hermione site?
Did I say they were nineteen? No I didn't. I quote from text: "If you must know, Albus, I placed twenty galleons on Mr Potter’s eighteenth birthday, and another ten on Ms Granger – I apologise; Mrs Potter’s nineteenth birthday."
This nineteenth birthday is *in the future*. As you know, Hermione turned seventeen the 19th of September during book six. She would then be eighteen by the time she and Harry got married, since they married in November in her seventh year. My story takes place at the END of SEVENTH year. Logically, she would turn NINETEEN the following autumn.
I've updated my summary and story details - this story does not follow book Six. I appologise that I didn't do this at once. Amelia Bones died in bok six as well.
Glad you liked it though. Personally I loathe the thought of Ron/Hermione, but generally like most Harry/Any!Female ships. |
| |
Those rules look confusing lol But this story was definitely cute. I laughed out loud when Snape awarded Gryffindor 20 points that was hilarious. Anyway, I really did like the humor in this fic  Great job! |
| |
|
