i love that ending! So funny. I also really liked the come back harry said to terry

He he he he he. Good work. I love H/Hr marriage fics.

A really cute story. A Big challenge, but you did a great job.

OMG!! I think I've died and gone to Harry/Hermy heaven!!

Er, the rating ought to be upped to be on the safe side. It is rather risque. ^_^ an interesting idea of being married with no one knowing though. Though they are altogether far too young and I would surmise Mr. Granger being far from accepting. ^_^

aaww,,, nice story..a little rated but im already 15 and i can take that...ur good and the way harry comforts hermione because of the mails they received..that is so sweet......like it so much..good job!!!!!!!!!

i think the funniest part of this section was Sirius following him around, Hermione's reaction and Snape awarding points to Griffindor! I can't believe you found a way to make that happen. i'm very impressed.

I also love Harry's surprise. I would have liked to see what else you could come up with for his inheritance.

I like that you based it off of the 4th book, but added some characters and things that happened in the other books. It flowed well, I thought.

great job!

what a cool idea! i love it! i especially love the fact that they are already together and i don't have to sit here and wonder how they will get there - i can just relax and enjoy the fluffiness. :-)

Haven't they talked to Ron about it yet? it seems like they should have tried to explain it to him or something. or are they just letting him figure it out for himself?

the reactions were classic. very in character. i loved Arthur Weasley's by the way. the only thing better would have been Snape walking in too - so that he could have that image burned into his brain for years to come... :-)

The primary problem - a most serious one at that - with this oneshot is that, if printed, it will not be as long as harry.

Also, before I forgot. I just wanna say it would be super awesome if your write the fanfic on how they fell in love before or the events in which they tried to hide their marriage.
I know ths is challenge but it would just be so fun to read. ^^ lol
Once again, awesome job.

I absolutely love this! It's so damn adorable. and the humorous banter are just so funny and cute.
And at the end of the first chapter I love how Harry replied "Kinky isn't it?" It made me laugh out loud. XD
You did a great job!!

I loved this story! You wrote it perfectly. Keep up the good work and write more like it.

HI, Great story! I really like it, it's funny and a good read.

enjoyed?.... more like loved it it was great.
reactions on McGonagall, Ron and others was priceless. It was a humorous, very nicely written one.
great work.

oh my god! this is hillarious. i cant stop giggle as i read the entire passage. good job!