Hana-xoxoSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/04/08
Absolutely lovely story!! Amazing emotion in the writing and great characterizzation of Alex I really felt for her
xoxo
Jama |
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MollyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/02/07
Awww! I wish there was another chapter! I really liked this story!  Please Please Please do a sequel! I really want to know all about little Alex's life and now baby Nichole's new life!!
Please Please MORE!!!!
Lots of  and joy,
Molly |
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XavielSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/09/06
That was a wonderful twist on the challenge. I know it's not really relevant to the story, but I love the way you write- simple and to the point, just like Rowling. It seems some people can make their stories and dialogue so complex, that it's just a chore to keep up. Really good job. |
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SayvorieSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/06/06
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Aw it's so cute! I love Alex! She's so cute! Wow I use that word alot! Well anyway I loved your story! It has a wonderful plot! |
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DrakeSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/04/06
I have to say, I think your version was much better than if you followed the challenge guidelines. I was really impressed with this story. I was a bit put off at the end, when we first saw Hermione had become pregnant, because it seemed almost like too convienient an ending, but I liked how you tied it to Alex. Good job! |
Author Feedback: Glad you liked how Hermione got pregnant 'cause of Alex  I actually thought of it at once when I first read the challenge: 'Hey, why don't I make Alex a Healer and have her heal Hermione's condition'...
I thought it would be an interesting twist. |
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love it,love it more,love it more-er,love it much,love it most, love it good,love it better, love it best, love it great,love it greater, love it greatest...... No words to explain how i loved it!!! wondeerful work! |
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Awww, this story was so terrible cute. Thanks a lot for write this challenge, was really beautiful. |
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i really love alex! she's so cute! my only complaint is that i would've liked it to have been a bit longer before hermione fell pregnant but that's alright. still a very cute and fluffy fic! can we expect a sequal? |
Author Feedback: Yeah, me too. I'm not to pleased with several parts of this story, but I had a writer's block from when Alex got adopted. I had to force everything else. That's one of the reasons it took so long to finish (Almost three years.) |
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That was a REALLYYYYY
awesome story I loved it, it was very cute. You should no HAVE to make a sequel to this!! It is totally awesome!! |
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~*Amy*~Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/04/06
Awww, that was a fantastic story, such a great ending too. Well done |
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aww... it was so lovely. i liked it. great job! |
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yukonSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/04/06
This was wonderful! It seems a shame to let it end there. You've created a wonderful character in Alex. Why not continue it? It would be fun to watch her grow up and go to Hogwarts with her sister. |
Author Feedback: Yeah Alex is quite wonderful. Unfortunately I've got no ideas for sequels or further stories from this universe. The end of this story fought me tooth and nail. |
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