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To Adopt or Not Adopt

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Hana-xoxo
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/04/08
Absolutely lovely story!! Amazing emotion in the writing and great characterizzation of Alex I really felt for her

xoxo
Jama
 

Molly
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/02/07
Awww! I wish there was another chapter! I really liked this story! Please Please Please do a sequel! I really want to know all about little Alex's life and now baby Nichole's new life!!

Please Please MORE!!!!

Lots of and joy,
Molly
 

Xaviel
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/09/06
That was a wonderful twist on the challenge. I know it's not really relevant to the story, but I love the way you write- simple and to the point, just like Rowling. It seems some people can make their stories and dialogue so complex, that it's just a chore to keep up. Really good job.
 

Sayvorie
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/06/06
That completely shocked and wowed me. You captured Harry and Hermione's characters so wonderfully. Love the idea of them adoption a 4 year old as apposed to a newborn, much more Harry-ish than if they just adopted the youngest. Makes sense that he'd adopt even if Hermione was fine because of his own childhood. Brilliant writing, had me laughing and worrying about Hermione and Alex all at once. Loved that she got pregnant... Would it be too much to ask for a sequel?
 

HermioneGranger057
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/06/06
Aw it's so cute! I love Alex! She's so cute! Wow I use that word alot! Well anyway I loved your story! It has a wonderful plot!
 

karenkate_kitty
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/04/06
I like your story... you were able to comply to the challenges pretty well... this one is a very nice read....
 

Drake
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/04/06
I have to say, I think your version was much better than if you followed the challenge guidelines. I was really impressed with this story. I was a bit put off at the end, when we first saw Hermione had become pregnant, because it seemed almost like too convienient an ending, but I liked how you tied it to Alex. Good job!
Author Feedback: Glad you liked how Hermione got pregnant 'cause of Alex I actually thought of it at once when I first read the challenge: 'Hey, why don't I make Alex a Healer and have her heal Hermione's condition'...
I thought it would be an interesting twist.
 

Lorena_72389
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/04/06
love it,love it more,love it more-er,love it much,love it most, love it good,love it better, love it best, love it great,love it greater, love it greatest...... No words to explain how i loved it!!! wondeerful work!
 

MandaEvelyn
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/04/06
I loved this fic! It was so sweet. You had me tearing up at one point! I've now read two of your stories so far and enjoyed them a lot! I'm off to read the third!
 

barby-chile
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/04/06
Awww, this story was so terrible cute. Thanks a lot for write this challenge, was really beautiful.
 

bananasrevil
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/04/06
i really love alex! she's so cute! my only complaint is that i would've liked it to have been a bit longer before hermione fell pregnant but that's alright. still a very cute and fluffy fic! can we expect a sequal?
Author Feedback: Yeah, me too. I'm not to pleased with several parts of this story, but I had a writer's block from when Alex got adopted. I had to force everything else. That's one of the reasons it took so long to finish (Almost three years.)
 

HarryPottelvr3
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/04/06
That was a REALLYYYYY
awesome story I loved it, it was very cute. You should no HAVE to make a sequel to this!! It is totally awesome!!
 

~*Amy*~
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/04/06
Awww, that was a fantastic story, such a great ending too. Well done
 

MyUsedRomance
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/04/06
aww... it was so lovely. i liked it. great job!
 

yukon
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/04/06
This was wonderful! It seems a shame to let it end there. You've created a wonderful character in Alex. Why not continue it? It would be fun to watch her grow up and go to Hogwarts with her sister.
Author Feedback: Yeah Alex is quite wonderful. Unfortunately I've got no ideas for sequels or further stories from this universe. The end of this story fought me tooth and nail.
 

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