So good! yet, so sad..
But so good! I liked how it was written too, very cool. and the poem before and after.

VERONICA YOU MADE ME SAD! -cries- oh em gee that was the best one-shot i've ever read...

so sad! =(

but extremeley awesome
and i loved the poem too

great job!

Wow, Lily-that was wonderful. Shades of Nicholas Sparks. You've captured the emotions she would be feeling very well, a bit of guilt and regret for not being there, sadness of course...but somehow joy at the thought that they'd be together again someday...which ends the story on a sort of hopeful note. One typo-"harry why did you have to died"-sixth paragraph from the bottom, it should be either 'die' or 'have to have died,' though that's a little awkward. It's a technicality though. The story is fantastic all around, and I really like the poem!

Duuuuuuude okay Lily let me be straight with you. You know that I am totally not a Harry/Hermione shipper but you made me feel somethin for them. BUT just in this story. I am still a Dramione shipper. Okay here goes..First You had a great amount of detail. I could feel the emotion within the words as I read it. Also you were good keepin everything in character. I kinda was hoping for more vivid flashbacks but hey that's just me. Your style of writing is really great. Why do you think I'm so intimidated that you read my story? Okay so she endd up with Ron-pity it wasn't Draco. Anyway, good stickin to the canon characters. I could feel the pain and sense of loss. I did feel it was just a little bit rushed at the end there. Like I said, I kinda hoped for a flashback but hey it's cool as it is. We have differnt writing styles and it's awesome that you wanted me to read this. I like you writing and hope to be as good at mine as you are someday. The overall review of your story is it is heart wrenching, you do feel the sense of loss over the death of the character and therefore can actually open your mind to the detail. You can feel the air of the graveyard and how cold and lonely it is. You can actually see it if you close your eyes. I was blown away by that heh. But then again I love details. Alright now this line "You'll stay right here in my heart always"-the 11th line from the bottom actually made tears form in my eye. With the story's impact you brought out the raw emotion that was being held back. It was like a whoosh, a sudden wave or rush that you get the feeling of the reality and gist of just how much she misses and loves him. It's a powerful phrase-in my opinion. Well that about sums up my review. I really enjoyed it but I am still a Dramione shipper all the way. Great job Lilykins, impressive and inspiring. Keep writing, you rock!

Can I cry? I can't stop this tear rolling down my face...

This is beautiful... I-I've no words for this it's just perfect... though very sad but it's perfect anyway

Keep up!

Cheerios,
Joanne

That was wonderful. Very sad. It was really great and I liked the different way you wrote it. I found a mistake, instead of "for" it was written as "fore". Just to let you know.

Grat you made me
Now how about one Harry and Hermione
Live happy ever after.
And no Ginny the HP6 got me
And i Like some NC17
" I a Bad Boy". But i like your Story
I give it two way up.

Aww, you've given me the sniffles now. Thanks for this beautifully tragic bit of fic.

oh, that is soo sad, I am crying however, as much as I hated it for being sad, I have to say that it was extremely well written!!

Oh so sad. I can really fell her pain! Nicely written.

yes, very sad. well written and very much a tear jerker. I started crying pretty quickly reading this but i do like what i read. i liked the details. thats really what got me. the cold air, the silent graveyard. the solidarity of it. the aloneness of it. crunching snow, poor hermione. good job. really good writing.
melissa
acoustics
pounding_silence@yahoo.com
thanks for the read!

You know I loved the story, but since I hadn't read the poem before, I just wanted to say how very touching that was. Absolutely perfect, my dearest flower. It tugged at the heart strings and if I weren't the manly man I am it would have made me cry. Depressingly beautiful in only a way that pain and loss can be.