Yay Harry and Hermione fluff. The bit about how he knew that the real Hermione would never yell or run from Harry was impressive. A bit on the short side, but hey, better than nothing. On to the next chapter.

The kindness, compassion, and love exuded from Hermione was felt through the computer screen. It was one of the most tasteful, and expressive forms of love that I have ever seen written in a fanfiction. I have to admit though that Lockhart at the end of the chapter left a bitter taste in my mouth. I am on to the next chapter

I can't wait for Hermione to get to Harry. We'll see sparks fly then, I just know it. I have to admit, an unexpected twist with the who "spirit express" thing that you had going on. Also I truly enjoyed Harry getting a little rough. If the Harry in the books did that then maybe he would have some more control in his life. And so my dear author, on to the next chapter.

Ohh MY GOD!! I lost my internet after you posted chapter 18 and to tell you the truth I still don't have it. I just have a reprieve now that I am at my grandmas house. I can't believe how many chapters you've posted since I read last. I wouldn't be surprised if you're on your version of the third book.

I adore what you did in this chapter, it showed us how truly important Hermione is to Harry and to be honest I loved that you made Abbey flirt with Snape. I could just see the look on his face when she said that. Just like a dear in the headlights. I laughed so hard. I'm on the the next chapter so wish me luck

Hail,
I loved this fic and I really enjoyed it. I look forward to your next story.
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Wow, what an end. I can't wait untill another one from you. How Hermione worked that one out was interesting. I wonder how long untill they get closer. And Davis and Sinistra. I'm guessing the next one will be based on the third book?

Why was Harry so non observant? I guess his injuries and shock made him a bit slow. Will Harry free Doby in this fic?

The end was quite dramatic. How Harry fought the snake was way different to what I expected. What does Dumbledor do to get his job back, I wonder.

How come the "one" can't fight well any more? And why doesn't anyone (namely Harry) bash up Snape? The spider's sceen was fast.

what a dramatic chapter. How Harry has been accused, how Abby was attacked, how Lucius has been threatened. All good.

This was a good chapter. How Hermione got the diary and went in and saw what was going on was nice. How Harry calmed Hemrione was fast, and much better than I would've. If Dobby kept trying to protect Harry, couldn't he just destroy the diary?

I feel sorry for Harry. Lockhart will be annoying. The way Harry was affected, and the attacks, whoa.

Wow, what a chapter. I wonder what is possesing the students, and what could cause so much damage by possesing? Is it a bit of Voldie, or is it something different?

Interesting world you've created. I hope to see more in it soon.

wow she just left him without saying goodbye? lol thats kinda funny she tells him wait here and he just waits and she never comes back, but its kinda messed up at the same time. I realllly enjoy reading ur stories of the 1st year and 2nd year of harry potter, i cant wait to read the next ones please continue with these stories and update soon with new chapters whenever u do start writing the story