mae513Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 27/03/06
Great chapter!! I hadn't realized when I posted the other review that you already had the first chapter up. I love it so far. Update soon!!  |
Author Feedback: Aww.... Thanks!! And that's okay. We all make misteaks!! Lol. |
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mae513Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/03/06
This looks to be an interesting story! I can't wait until you actually have the first chapter uploaded. I look forward to reading more  |
Author Feedback: Um. I DO have the first chapter uploaded. That's what the little next button is for. Lol. Thanks!!  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/03/06
ooh! you gave me an example of that word i didn't know. thank you.
so here's your review!
it was great. i wonder if lily will be able to use her mind power's with anyone or if it is only between her and james?
AND i wonder if lily and james still be friends in hogwarts or will they be arch-enemies and the in 6th or 7th year become friends again, then bf and gf, and then husband and wife?
I wonder...
P.S. i am going to call myself anonymous101, so that you can't confuse m with any other anonymous's, okay? |
Author Feedback: Any time!! And thank you for the fabulous review. Lily and James will NOT be able to use their mind power on others, and they WON'T be friends at the end of the year. That's all I can say. Well, anonymous101, I think that idea will work very well. |
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oooooooo!!!! i want to take up your review space too!!!!!!!!!
sorry, im such a spaz, but i guess if you know me, you already know that...anyway for all of you normal humans (people that are not mischief managed) the first chapter is good......... |
Author Feedback: Well, DUH, it's good; I wrote it. And if it wasn't good, you'd tell me. Because you're my beta!!!! And take up all the review space you want. |
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sorry, i pressed send twice
 ha ha I'm a loser......I'm taking up your revies space |
Author Feedback: That's okay. And when you take up my review space, it adds another review, and then people think my story's popular, and then they come and read it. And that makes me happy!! |
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I think it's a clever idea. and most Prologus I've read are 2 sentences and in the first chapter...........................LAMO'S haha. So if i had Synesthesia and i didni't like them i could notify them as vomit green? lets say.......and i synesthesia a real sickness/thing? |
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I think it's a clever idea. and most Prologus I've read are 2 sentences and in the first chapter...........................LAMO'S haha. So if i had Synesthesia and i didni't like them i could notify them as vomit green? lets say.......and i synesthesia a real sickness/thing? |
Author Feedback: Well, thank you for not saying mine's lame. That's the nicest thing anyone's ever said about me. Lol. Yes, you might be able to, but I'm really not sure.I have a very limited knowledge of this; I only know what I know from A Mango Shaped Space, which is a REALLY good book. I highly recommend it. And yes, synesthesia is a real disorder, though like I said, it's not much of a disorder. It doesn't interfere with anything except maybe math. Google it for more info. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/03/06
huh? i don't get it. can you give me an example of synesthesia? please!
i'll review! you know you want a review. lol.
how would synesthesia affect her though? hmm...i guess i will have to read to find out. right? |
Author Feedback: Synesthesia is when, let's say, you meet someone, and they say, "Hi, my name's Fred," and you automatically think of the color purple. That's the most common way. Some people think of, maybe, chickens when Fred introduces himself, or they smell ketchup, or another random thing that has to do with your senses.
And, yes, I DESPERATELY want reviews. I'm about to put Ch. 1 up.
Synesthesia would affect her, like when she met a mean person, she might think of a yucky color, like Pepto-Bismol Pink. Hmm... Not a bad idea... I could use that for a yucky girl....
And thank you SO SO SO SO SO SO much for not flipping out on how short that was. You, at least, remember that a prologue means it's short.  SHocker, right??? |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/03/06
This is way too short. If you want people to read it, you are gonna want way more written per chapter, like at least 1000 more words per chapter if not more. |
Author Feedback: Well, if you had BOTHERED to read the Author's Note (That's why it's there. Not for me. FOR YOU) then you would know that that was the PROLOGUE. And the chpter title was PROLOGUE. As in SHORT. And you wanna know how long the next chapter is? 11 pages. 73 KB. And the next chapter is 8. And it's not even finished. Please don't tell me how to write my own story when you don't even have an account.
EDIT: Sorry if I was a little harsh. I guess I was feeling a little angsty. Heh...heh...heh...? |
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